Alright I liked this story please update soon.

interesting story can't wait for the next chapter

Interesting start. I look forward to seeing how you develop your ideas and plot lines.

Good story, I'm looking forward to how you develop it.

clearly a more interesting take on the story i like but feel the story needs more explaining threw story, conversations, and actions than just first person explanations

I like the idea and the story. Parts of it are pretty cheesey in that they've been done about a million times. And Sasuke's and Sakura's attitudes toward Naruto changed way too fast and without a major catalyst to explain it. Looking forward to reading more.

I like our fic and look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Nice story u have here...Nice grammar and I think It'll develop into a nice plot too (I hope).

I always like when Naruto, or any other of the characters can be strong, by mastering the basics, I always thought it was important. Nice to see it here...

Nothing much to say for now.

Waiting for the next chapter

Good chapter, interesting story you have here.

What team will he have?