aw! this was beautiful! reminds me of the novel Flipped. it was written extremely well; not too done up but not skimmed over either. this really IS a great piece :]

Aw! This is so sweet and sad.I feel so bad for Teddy. Hpoefully, Victoire will release that her Prince Charming is waiting for her. It's a really good story. Have you thought about continuing it? Or writing some other stories on them. I would love to hear your version of how they got together. Also I like how you put a twist on it and didn't make them best friends growing up.