I enjoyed reading this fan fic Thank you for posting it.

I enjoyed this, I read it the whole way through without stopping. I noticed a couple grammatical errors but I didn't mind it.

Very interesting story

I have finished reading this story and I have to say that it was an emotional ride for me!

I mean I was happy when they formulated a friendship but cried when terra lost himself to the darkness. But I was happy that there was hope for aqua an the end. You done a great job with the story, I can’t believe you didn’t get a lot of reviews with this story, I mean this was so epic. I think it was because you posted all the chapters all at once, I guess if you posted them one at a time you would’ve got more reviews. But still magnificent job with this story!

i read this and finished it back when you first published it. but i didn't review until now.

this story is really good. i like the way Terra and Aqua bond like they did. they seemed closer than siblings with the friendship they formed.

but i kinda kept wishing that a kiss would come in. but that's just because i'm a total nutcase for Tequa stories. then again, you made them a little young for that. it's your story. so you can do what you want.

nevertheless, i love this story. it's cool in how you formulated the plot and the friendship, even if Terra doesn't talk much at the beginning. hee hee.

by the way, you say the adventure was when Terra and Aqua were 10 and 11 years old. and that this is fifteen years before BBS. um... that's a little young for them. they'd be in their twenties in BBS. they're in their late teens in BBS, everyone knows that.

I love it when she's waving her hand in his face. He's trying to be Mr. Stoic but she gets a little reaction out of him. Great moment, and a perfect response from Master Eraqus.

This is gonna sound dumb, but I bet you'd get more reviews if you didn't put the entire chaptered story up at once.

But really, I'm glad you did, 'cause I'd be irritated if I have to wait for this awesome story to be updated.

All I have to say is, honestly, wow. WOW. This is a very impressive piece!

oh wow this is awesome, i love how you gave Aqua and Terra a backstory to thiere lives before BBS,