PLEEEEEAAAAASE CONTINUE

Going to add more to this? I ran out of chapters to read!

MORE. Seriously don't leave me hangin. I know uve not updated for a while but pls. What if I say pretty pls. I love Ur stories. Good banta. Good story line. Development of chars even though we know them. Again I say MORE

wens the next chapter coming out?

Dude you can not leave us hanging like this. Good fic so far, Keep up the good work

Awsome, i love it. Plz dont stop

Excellent chapter! I love Kasumi! However, she had best keep her hands off of Joker! He completely belongs to Shep!

Another wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see how the meeting with Anderson goes.

I loved the last two chapters! Especially their banter and - dare I say - increasing tension?

Your humor is fast and has great rhythm, and that makes it an easy and quick read. For that exact reason, it would be awesome if chapters were longer ;) -And yes, I'm also being greedy...

Please update asap. :D

Space pizza XD

Love it! Love it! Love it! And OF COURSE Zaeed would think Shephard is hot once she threatened to beat his ass - violence is his thing (and that's what makes him so damn awesome!)

No one is better than Joker, though! ;-)

Excellent chapter! And now on the Citadel, where I am sure much havoc will be raised...

I haven't reviewed any of the first one or this one yet because I couldn't stop reading it. I live all things Joker. And I live how you have really made him yours. Can't wait for the next update.

That was awesome.

Thinking you need to continue this asap.

I LOVE this story! I have always loved Joker and I cannot wait to see this story through his eyes, so to speak!

And they are such a cute couple.

the action is good and well written, but it's describing scenes that we've all played through ourselves, with minor adjustments to your lines and such. My point is, that if you want to keep it interesting, you need to have some original plot in every chapter, or we're going to get bored fast.

For eksample; This is a romance story, right? Then a rerun of the action scenes from the game are not enough - there should be more about what the characters think and feel. You did well when Shep was hit with the concussion shot and Jokers reaction to it, so more of that might boost your story.

I hope it was useful. Sally

good chapter. I wish it was longer, would that be possible?

lol at Laura's comment on Mordin in the end. Oh, btw, the 'alien'version of racism is xenofobia, i think... Something like that - don't quote me on it ;)

looking forward to the next one!