Didnt realized someone already beat me to the healthcare

I know this was written before trump's time in the house, all I could think of was Make America Great Again during Jules speech. I will say one huge problem with the the states have to be their medical care, a family member getting sick could put the whole family on the streets without a cent to their name. Also I find it sad how many vets who fought for the country seems to be homeless or arnt being funded properly after their service, one would think it would be alittle bit hard to join back into regular jobs with the horrors of war.

I guess with that said I truly enjoy your writing styles and have to admit I've read this way to many times that skimming or ignoring parts have been a habit until I find something interesting.

Oh and risk is a savage game just like monopoly you kinda end up hating the other players during the many hours of gameplay.

It was tragic to lose Manic, but for him to come back physically but not mentally was heartbreaking. He might as well have not come back at all if he couldn't accept the fact that he was safe and had nothing to fear here.

I've always found this part quite harsh on the hedges part one just can forget that horrible stuff that has happen in just a week. Considering he was unconscious for most of it and only been at the house 2 nights

The only thing that could make the states better is a good heath care system. A family member getting sick and put them on the streets from medical bills.

Please make more pleeeeaaaaasssse

GOD! This is dark! But it had a happy ending. Sort of.

Are you go on a finish this story from this last chapter. I look on your site and can't find the section. Just a remake of this story

please do another story of this please

jajajajajaja that is funny pillow fight jajajajajajajajajajaXD

Dude you are ny saving grace it is so hard to find good fanfiction with the whole undeground family

This. Was. THE. BEST FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ!

I am not exaggerating; as a Christian, and a writer, this has affected me emotionally in a way few stories ever have.
It was beautiful. Purely and perfectly beautiful. I love the way you kept God at the core of the fic without making it cheesy or cringe-worthy-a feat few Christian fanfic authors manage to accomplish.
While reading this, I found myself looking at my wonderful, loving family in an entirely different light. I'll probably never look at a victim story in the news the same way again.

Admittedly, I kinda figured out after the first few paragraphs exactly what was going on, but I still found myself following "Scourge" on his emotional roller coaster as though I didn't know. Aside from the Sponge-bob references (I'm no fan) I'd say it was absolutely, brilliantly executed in every way.

My only real complaint was that you did what you did with Chapter 18 and the unfinished sequel! This story was a perfect stand-alone, ending on the perfect note, no sequel (or revamp) necessary.

That being said, I give this story a galaxy out of five stars for pure fan fiction poetry (despite the absence of Shadow :P).

Bravo! Bravo, I say!
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P.S. KEEP WRITING!

I click the review button. Lol, I said clock instead of click, but it still autocorrected it.

Totally amazing the hole story was great I alomst cried a few times

wow update soon

For some reason, during this whole story, I couldn't decide whether or not Scourge was manic. Every other chapter, I would change my mind on who he was, even though there were obvious signs that he was Manic. i have no idea why, but I contribute it to your writing. Good job at conveying Scourge's emotions and anxieties about being found out.