yes she was why did Peter not tell i would have not lkied to live in a white lie.

You were right. Lise was too brave to have so little said about her. The ending bit was heart breaking. Even though this was a mere seven hundred word prose, it was written perfectly. Dare I say it, perfect enough to be put with the works of Lois Lowry.

I'm VampireLoveStory. Look me up on ff. it just refuses to let me sign in.

Crying.

Well written.

Wonderful. I agree Lise Johansen deserves for her story to be told. I only wish you expanded on the plans the Resistance was planning. I got goosebumps while reading Peter's thoughts. Good job

Loved it. I agree with you, Lise Johansen deserves her story to be told. I got goosebumps while reading Peter's thoughts. Wonderful job

This is so sad.

I'm crying.

It's really really good.

-icy-

Wow. That's depressing, but awesome. :D

You have amazing grammer! There aren't many people on this website with grammer that good. :) You should write a book!

I really like your writing style. I can't put my finger on what exactly I like about it, but I know that I love it.

Keep writing! :D

Kenzie

OMG I JUST SENDED THIS TO A COMPLETELY WRONG AUTHOR OH WELL UM GREAT STORY KINDA SAD BUT I THINK ITS TRUE LISE SHOULD HAVE GOT HER OWN STORY TOO

Oh my GOSH...that was amazing. I loved the ending with Peter...that was incredible. Keep up the good work;)

true, it wuz shaky at first. but b4 i could say, this story is worthless, it became a story i could not put down! attention to detail and character is amazing! the drama, the thoughts, unbelieveable! Bravo Naflower05! Just amazing!

so sad :(