Such an exciting story and so well written. Thank you.

Really enjoyed your story

Amazing story, amazing writing!

I love it

Love this

This was a hard chapter to read. Not looking forward to the next one either:-( Poor Edward

This is why I can't stop reading this!

Love a sleep-chatty Bella!

I love your Carlisle, BTW.

Smoothing the dogs ears. Ugh, so sad.

I love the way you gave us insight into the setting, then pow, they're attacked.

Is this the end?

I wish he was just normal and NOT a whore. Its just tacky and makes him fucking gross. And why pair a WHORE with a virgin? its so fucking NOT BALANCED...ones pure and ones all used the fuck up...gross

I swear you only ever read about people being this emotionally retarded. and its so out of place with Edward cause he told us a few times in earlier chapters that hes a straight forward type, no bullshit...except hes all full of bullshit

I really don't care about for people that cant talk about their shit. Edwards a fucking pussy.

I don't get it! Bella is in a WAR ZONE FREAKING OUT AND SAYING SHIT LIKE...PLEASE...PLEASE DONT MAKE ME USE A GUN!

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if I'm in a war zone and I don't HAVE a gun I will fucking kill you and take yours!