Reviews for Valentine's Day
TheSingingPterodactyl chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
This was very sweet. The ending made me tear up, her repeating it over and over again. The angst killed me, too. C'mon Becker! Way to ruin it.
Splendid writing!
Squabble chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I loved this story! The idea how they're trying to make each other jealous is fantastic!

Like Danny said, Becker/Abby...wooooaaah... But it's only for show :)

Another thing that was fairly interesting, was the fact Becker messed up in the end :D. Not usually his thing. I can't help but wonder what happened in the end, does he team get messed up in relationship standards? Come to think of it, throughout this story Danny was the only one who was all alone xD

Personally in my opinion I think Sarah was a bit OOC but that may be the jealousy taking over.

Well if I'm rambling on in a review that's this long, I loved the story!

'"Absolutely, darling!" Becker joked, ruffling Abby's hair happily.' One word, or sound, or whatever...AWWW!

"Who died?" yeah that's Danny to break the awkward with more awkward.

"Last year, I saw her kissin' you like there was no bloody tomorrow.". Rofl

"Mate, you guys have been in and out of scraps while Becker was-I dunno, in boot camp or something." I love Danny xD

"He quotes Shakespeare, you quote Plain White Tees?" that was brilliant.

"Your both morons," nice way to put it Danny.
kate.is.doing.performing.arts chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
thats beautiful :')
Katya S chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Wonderful!

Is there will be Becker/Sarah part? :-)
Logan the Awesome chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
That was a cute ending. I also found Danny very funny.

"Who died?"

I don't know if you planned him to be funny, but he was. Good job. I really liked it!