I would like to thank you.

This is the very first fan fiction of ANYTHING I have ever read back in 2010, I found about this website thanks to this story. This was an inspiration for me writing. I even remember the song I listened to while reading this.

Again, thank you.

Excellent story from start to finish i really enjoyed it.

This was a great and sweet story you dont see many exile Tali ff nice job on it.

Great story. Hope you continue to write your stories

wow

Now that is how a Tali romance should be! Very well done. Non-explicit, romantic, and sensual. (I think that's how you spell that)

Anyway, awesome stuff! Loved it!

i love this storry it is very sweet thank you for brightening up my week

Woah! That was...hot, but was the breast part really necessary? :P

You might want to check a couple of missing words and letters but good story, keep it coming :)

nice reimagining of the romance with tali

Wow. Amazing.

IM A FAN OF YOUR MAN...THAT WAS ...HOT

I WANT TO SHEPERD...

YOUR FAN X12

I'd say this falls into the category of a "soft M" (15-16ish). it may not be terribly explicit, but it does directly address their "intimacy". Tasteful for the most part, if a bit, sensual...

Only a few issues in terms of grammatical mechanics, namely, tense shifting. A few of the later paragraphs have shifts between present and past tense, clear that up, and you have gold.

WoW brilliant. lots of.. detail, very good sad to see her exiled though

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG THIS IS SO FING AWSOME I CANT EVEN TELL YOU DUDE SERIOULSLY IM THINKING I SHOULD CHANGE MY SREEN NAME TO FANBOY FOR TALISHEP SERIOUSLY THATS HOW GOOD IT IS SERIOUSLY

great story, keep up the good work.