Beautiful, but I almost felt as if the ending wasn't quite complete...

Still, that was fantastic!

:)

Kamai6

This fic so needs a sequel!

So good. I like how you wrote this from both perspectives.

Hey there,

WOW this is a GREAT job on a story. Fantastic and I really did enjoy this immensely/greatly and terrificly. :-D GREAT job, keep it up.

Melissa

OMG you must write more! *flails* Maybe you are "unable" (psh, nonsense) to write full-out fluff, but you are a master of subtlety, which is just as squee-worthy :D I absolutely love how Helen noticed Niko's eyes first, and that little bit about how she decided that his smile complimented them better _ See? It's the little things that make it so lovely, and you're really good at putting those elements in. :D

Besides, with all these challenges, you'll be writing fluff by the end of the year. No worries LOL

luv,

Miss Pookamonga aka Mimzy ;p

This was so cute! i really liked it! particularly that line about a part of Nikola's heart attaching forever to Helen...omg that was so amazingg! haha. wonderful job! ]

3 Keaira

Wonderful fic! What I really enjoyed about this were the descriptions, 'silken voice', 'delicate fingers', 'startling bright eyes'...it really makes this fic stand out from the norm. Lovely!

'Nikola felt a piece of his heart tear itself away and attach itself forever to this vision.' - It's a single sentence, but it says and implies so much. Beautiful.

What a wonderful version of a first meeting between these two, even if Helen can't remember it. Who can forget Nikola's smile? Impossible! )

Nicely done. Wonderfully written!

Well, cute fiction ... don't really know what to say ... xD

Good job ... very good job I like it ! :)