Reviews for End of Innocence
nyanyanya22 chapter 3 . 4/9
The vampire theory was always an interesting one.

But, just so you know, a recently uncovered magazine interview from 2002 has disproven it. Ruby specifically states she doesn't believe in vampires, and has "Way more teeth then them, rows and rows."

However, that interview also backs up the ragdoll theory
nyanyanya22 chapter 1 . 3/29
I have an idea for a long, multichapter fic. Anyone can use this idea or a variation of it, I just want to see it.

It would start with Ruby waking up one fine morning, except...this isn’t her bed...these aren’t her clothes...THIS ISN’T her house! And WHERE is everybody!? Attempting to go outside, she finds herself in an unfamiliar isolated location, and screams out for her friends!

Cut to the Gloom Cast having a normal morning. Except Iris notices Ruby hasn’t woken up yet, and with a hop skip and a jump goes to wake her up. When she stirs, her eyes widen with concern, and, in a cynical and unRuby like tone, asks a simple question. “Who are you and how did you get in my house?” Iris is both confused and concerned, and this worsens when “Ruby” claims this isn’t her room, and doesn’t recognize their friends, claiming she lives alone.

For those who haven’t picked up on it, OUR Ruby(from the show) has swapped minds with the Classic 2004 Ruby used on the early hot topic merch, and the old 2004 website. The Ruby who wears a skirt, high heels, and stockings(? I think) instead of the normal pants and small boots. The Ruby who, while happy on the inside, never smiles or outwardly expresses it. The Ruby who’s slightly older. The Ruby who loves to make morbid death jokes(similar to what Misery makes). The Ruby who lives alone, in a small and decreped mansion, with only normal non sentient crows for company. The Ruby who has a normal bike instead of a Chaplin bike. The Ruby who’s complex and not understood.

I’ve always wanted more fics revolving around this older, slightly darker depiction of Ruby from before the show, a very much different persona. What better way to do that then to swap their bodies and put them in each other’s bodies!

The fic would have two main plots. Classic Ruby reacting to the world of the show(Classic Ruby wasn’t heavily connected to the Supernatural, other then a few haunted gargoyles) as the rest of the cast tries and fails to “Fix Ruby”, trying to jog her memory, get her baking, singing, ANYTHING. This doesn’t work, as they’re different people, and Classic Ruby grows to take a liking to Misery, the two sharing a love of morbid jokes and never smilingis. .

Meanwhile, our Ruby has to deal with being completely on her own, with no company whatsoever in the creepy halls Classic called home. Not even the crows talk!(Crows don’t talk in classic land) and the cliffs make gettting anywhere else difficult.

I’m not sure how you’d end it, lots of options exist, just DONT rush it and don’t do anything overly complicated. This is meant to be character driven and long.s
Othello chapter 7 . 12/6/2015
Cool, you is something I'm looking for a long long time, is there gonna be more?
Othello chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
Nice, wonder what will happen next
Valtharr chapter 7 . 10/24/2014
So...is this being continued? I know, it's been two years since the last update, but I can hope, right?

I really like the story so far, wouldn't have expected that to be fair. I usually don't take well to stories trying to make light-hearted properties darker and more serious, but somehow, this is different. So, I really hope you'll continue this one day.
J.P chapter 7 . 12/31/2012
I love the story so far. The mystery has my curiosity piked. I can wait to find out more about this girl sapphire who she, is she many be Ruby's sister, are they even related? I've got to know and what have you got planned for this guy Gabe I just can't wait to find out.
Veneesla chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Lol! Frankenstein! I get it! XD Great story.
jokergirl129 chapter 7 . 7/4/2012
It's good to see that Ruby is feeling better but it's clear there is going to be some tension in the house. With Gabe being a werewolf and Ruby a vampire, and given the history between their kind, then it's going to take some getting used to with them being under the same roof. But Gabe doesn't seem like such a bad guy and so far things seem to be going well. So in a matter of time we'll see how things go.
omgjerkstolemyname chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
i thought ruby was a living doll (her love of sewing and the stitches around her eyes) or a human (idk...) but the vampire thing was kewl and its really entertaining! 2 thumbs up! please continue!
Lichylichy chapter 7 . 7/3/2012
Werewolves and vampirs aren't on the best of terms. Please post the next chapter soon! I am as impatient as Iris.
Lichylichy chapter 2 . 6/21/2012
Oh, I'm going to favorite and subscribe. Sorry! I'm going now.
Lichylichy chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I like it. Really good. You really highlighted Misery's sixth sense thing. How she can sense when something bad is about to happen. I've been waiting for several months, can you please put up the next chapter!
WOYoYo32 chapter 6 . 5/28/2012
I'd like to see you keep going with this. Love the story line and where your going. Nice way of building suspense in the end too. I looked at the date it was last updated, it hasn't been THAT long, but still a fair amount of time. So I really do hope you keep this going, and I'll read whenever you do.
IZlover9719 chapter 6 . 5/7/2012
I really love your story! Its really good. I didnt check the last update date so are you working on the next chapter or is this story abandoned? OMG PLEASE DONT ABANDON IT! :)
k.h chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
love the idea all id like would be more
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