You got me at Vitamin ME. That was hilarious!

OMG! That was just great

Wow this was hilarious
Gosh mikan is so frickin naive.
Poor koko he can never beat natsume except in being adorable cuz hyuga doesn't do adorable. :-D

A FAIL at humor? BULLCRAP! Not a moment when I couldn't stop laughing at her innocence and his pick up lines

OMG! This was hilarious I laught my ass off! :D

omg i was laughing so much how mikan is so dumb loool really good lool

Oh my gosh sooo funny I was laughing my head off! really entertaining I love Koko he is such a great charater!

this is absolutley hillarious i litterally fell over laughing at mikans stupidity! i feel bad for koko though i almost wish mikan had understood just to see how she would react! :)

Nice! But poor Koko cause he forgot to remove his thumb everytime he reads a title :3

haha!

that's okay.

though it didnt make me laugh but, i smiled at some bits! (truely.)

Poor Koko. Hehe.

Funny! So cute! :) Please continue writing!

LOL. xD Mikan's reaction to the pick-up lines are really hilarious man! x)) I was giggling the entire time. She really is innocent. That cute girl. :)) *laughs*

Cute oneshot! :))
BTW, it's me Kate! Remember me? :) Hope so.

Keep it up! :D

This was so funny!

Ur not a fail at making humor!

Good story .

... *gasp* You've actually updated after how many years. And I've gotta say, you're still awesome.

First off, this thing is so unique. Not many people write about Koko alone.. It's usually Koko x Sumire, a pairing which I don't really like, but then I LOVE Koko, so thank you for writing about him.

Secondly, no typographical errors here, even if you haven't beta-d it! Although there're some points where you miss a punctuation mark, but whatever.

Third, this is so FUNNY. I was laughing-and still am-laughing my butt out. Koko's funny antics plus Mikan's density [reasoning to her dense answers] is a definite winner and oh boy did this thing make me laugh. :)

Fourth, yaay, there's a lil bit of MxN here, like when she waited for him outside and when he burned Koko's sleeve 'cause he was jealous the whole time that Koko was 'hitting' on Mikan! Ahh, love.

Good job on this, Chie. ;) You may have not updated as fast but then you sure haven't lost it. I hope to see more from you, friend. Oh yeah, thanks for everything you've done for me, you chicken.

Till then,

- N.A.