Reviews for The Other Promise
finalfantasy13-2lover chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
I love this! Its really good!
CasualFictionWriter23 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
OH MY GOOOODNESS! This is the best SoNami fanfiction I ever read! The dialogue, the setting, everything is perfect like it was canon to the end of KH2 before Sora and Riku got the letter from Mickey. But you forgot to add romance category, I almost missed this fanfic when I was searching, you know. 10/10 stars, 1000 thumbs up from me, and my excitement level IS OVER 9000!
LittleMissMidnight chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
So romantic and cute. i loved this one-shot from start to end. it wasn't really fluffy romantic but it was romantic enough for me to like. You did a very good job on this. well done.
SlashLover93 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
OMG I ABSOLUTELY ADORE this! SoraxNamine is the best! You should right a sequel, I would really love to know what happens next! )
oceanicblue chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I really enjoyed this story. I'm not a NaminexSora type, but I really liked Roxas's slight jealousy. It was a cute one-shot.
Jane St. Valentine chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
"The witch searched through every memory of Sora's that she had. He had rarely ever hugged anyone before, not even Kairi. Normally the mere action would make him nervous, startled, deer-in-the-headlights frozen."

Aha, so I wasn't the only one who noticed that. Nice work, incorparating it in this. :)
Kiryn chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
You are exceptionally good at writing in-character, and keeping close to canon. I heart this almost as much as your Aqua/Vanitas work. Spectacular!
dockingdisney chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
ahhh! i love this!
songs chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I am in love with this!

It seriously inspired me to write SoraNamine's of my own.

Your characters are always so IC. And the story itself is so simply yet lovely.

Great job.
boymayorofsecondlife chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
My god, you deserve so many more reviews for this. There's not enough canonfic in the Kingdom Hearts fandom! The story behind all these characters is what makes the series so beautiful, why don't we write about the good stuff?

:D but you did...and this is absolutely wonderful and sweet. When Sora remembered Namine and was bouncing around all excitedly-such an in-character reaction, and not too over-the-top, but you could still tell how much he loved her and was ecstatic to remember her again! Aww, and their conversation: Epically. Perfect. I wanted to cry at some points, and I 'aww'd a whole awful lot...again, it was so perfect! Almost like a little extension of the game itself!

Since I'm kind of in love with Roxas, I may be biased, but I think you handled him as if you just stuck your hand into your Playstation II, dragged him out, and plopped him down in here! :3 I really...it's...just so perfect. Nyargh, my words cannot express it! DX

Also, the new "Keyblade...dream...realm..." really struck a chord in me (I don't know if it's all your invention or if it's in the game-I'm only halfway through KHII and I haven't played KHI-but it's like the realm Roxas fell into, but with more characters depicted, right?) I found it so sweet, the way you included the Nobodies in there, too; and Axel and Xion are the 'darker patch of unformed tiles', right? So sweet, and so sad T_T
Achalys chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Aw, this was a really sweet fic, and way better than most one-shots! The characters were really well kept in their own...characteri..ness. Ya.

Anyways, this was such an enjoyable read, and also sort of sad to me. It was a really good bitter-sweet mix, and you totally puled it off!

Have a great day!
Flightfoot chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I feel so sorry for Namine, I mean she's trapped in white rooms all the time and the only people who wanted to rescue her were Sora and the Riku Replica. Great story, by the way.
Kiome-Yasha chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU~~! I can't even stress that enough! It's so good to see a sweet Namora fic! Especially from such an awesome writer! X3 Like truly, this had to be the best Namora I've read, it's sweet and cute! I just loved everything about it! You have a knack of making almost any pairing good, and I'm glad you were able to do the same for Namine/Sora; I mean, even as I say I'm a big Namixas fan, I'll be the first to admit that Namine/Sora were my first ever pairing I supported in KH, so hence, they will always have that special place in my heart that Namixas can't ever meet with :3. AGAIN, I would like to scream with much affection...THANK YOU DIVINE! *MEGAGLOMP*

I love how they met his dream, recollecting their memories together and their promise. I wish I could write like this, but I leave such grasp of awesomeness to you XD. This actually makes me wish there was more Namora fanfics! Like seriously! Don't people know they're cute too? I mean, yeah, I know Sora is meant to be with Kairi, but...there's always that chance him and Namine could be something more...Idk, maybe it's just the inner Namora in me that fantasize such things to be true...sorry Roxas X(.

Speaking of Roxas, I loved how he walked on the two; it made me feel bad because it's obvious from what you shown that he has grown some type of feelings for Namine. But, as he observes her interaction with Sora even more it's like he realized maybe she doesn't feel the same and actually wishes to be Sora. I actually said "Aww, poor Roxas.." Bwahaha! BUT, there needs to be sweet Namora sometimes...at least for me X3. You could tell he was upset, considering how cold his tone got and how it seemed like he wanted to attack Sora again like in KH2 XD.

Sadly, I really don't care much for Kairi, so even as sad she seemed that Namine had feelings for Sora...the feeling being mutual, I couldn't help but to say "YES! He loves Namine! Not Kairi!" Sorry Divine, I know how much you like Sokai :(, so just ignore that comment from me ;.

Anyway, this was sweet and just...I can't explain...just AWESOME! You were able to grasp the emotions between Namine and Sora very well. You made their meeting with each other sweet and calming. There was no rush of love between them, which was something I really liked. You made it develop into a start of something that could be possible and that what made me grin like idiot while reading this. You didn't rush their friendship, letting them keep their promise to each other to be friends without anymore lies. And that, is such an accomplishment, making it seem like something more may happen in the future that actually may lead Sora actually loving Namine; which kind of shows of a beginning towards that development by the end :).

Thank you SO much again for doing this! I really don't deserve to ask for such a gift, but I knew if there was someone who I wanted to write something between Namine and Sora; I knew it had to be you. If you EVER want a request, be free to ask; or about ANYTHING, please do so. As a friend, I would feel bad if I couldn't do anything in return. Thank you Divine, you truly are a good friend I have made here in FF. I need to catch up to your other updates soon, so be sure that I haven't forgotten ;D. Love ya, cya! :3

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VirgilTheart chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I definitely think you should explore this story some more. You write SoNami wonderfully. 3

Your Pal,

VT

PS: Did I detect a hint of Roxiri there? ;D
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
BEAUTIFUL~!
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