The only fault I can find with this story is that it’s a single chapter!

This so perfectly captured what I like to think was Padmé’s state of mind at this point.

Such a great OS !

Perfection! Really, possibly my favorite "missing moment" scene of all time. Character motivations were spot on...Padme's denial of Anakin's transition from boyhood to manhood, her reconciliation with that truth, and Anakin's need for that validation. Ugh! Why can't I write like this ? : P Jeally.

VERY nicely done! I loved it, very detailed and well written! I love additions like this, makes their love story richer :D greatness! I hope you write more like this!

Wonderful story! :D

Padme's point of view for this story really captured what was going through her mind at this point in the film.

This was one of those stories that I didn't want to end.

I don't usually review stories unless they're awesome, or suck-ish. (In that case I am brutally honest.)

So thank you for a great story.

I love this story! It shows Anakin and Padme's affection for each other growing and it makes you feel the emotions of the characters. Thanks for sharing this.