Reviews for Naruto Uzumaki and the Dark Path of Shinobi
AVID35 chapter 13 . 3/19/2019
Owl please
Guest chapter 3 . 3/23/2018
? I don't understand why you would have Naruto worry about people having knowledge that he can shoot spells and how would people in the naruto universe know its a spell considering the fact that chakra exists. Magic would be an unknown element tk them. If anything, they would assume its a bloodline or the wand was a unique weapon.
Also the part where Naruto went to Sasuke and ask not to reveal what he saw...seriously?
noxenrom chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
Sorry. This meshup is cringy as fuck.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27/2017
Good effort just not appealing to me
Disturbedhrt chapter 6 . 1/6/2017
I was enjoying this story to u did a stereo typical bash Naruto chapter won't read another story written by you
Palkitty chapter 1 . 4/15/2016
Just a quick note. The other 4 stories you writes a Book 1...2 and so on. Someone not being observant (coughcough-me) might read the wrong one thinking that it is unrelated especially if they don't read author notes until the last chapter.

Just thought I'd throw that out there.
-Palsville

P.S. now to go read the other 4... :)
rhizz17 chapter 13 . 3/25/2016
update please
kittiesfrompluto chapter 6 . 3/1/2016
Steven King lives in Maine, that's why most of his stories take place there. Its not a fetish, it's just easier to write about a place you're familiar with.
Psyka chapter 13 . 12/3/2015
Wow oh wow poor Hinata and Naruto but I love it please please please update again soon please wow
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
way of life chapter 3 . 4/26/2015
You know, I quite like your concept, it was nice but have to admit regrettably that your's is one of the stupidest Naruto's ever. I mean, I liked your first two chapters and then you go ahead and ruin it all. Really, really? This is the best you came up with? You had such potential to be a great writer but really?

You know, I wrote 'really' three times in the previous sentence alone but my incredulity has not yet diminished a bit because what your Naruto did was stupidest thing ever.

Your naruto enters a room while having a leverage but ends up begging -literally, he's begging- for a favor and finally makes a deal that helps his nemesis (according to you, as you have titled the chapter 'Severed Bonds'). Just how in the hell did you manage that? Because sure as hell did not read it further than when Naruto proposes his deal. And why did you do that? I am sure you saw the folly in that, then why? Why Oh god, why?

I am seriously disappointed.
asdfasfdasfsa chapter 13 . 11/28/2014
Sakura needs to be less of a fangirl over that duck as' and sasuke should just die.
Magikarp Karp chapter 13 . 8/9/2013
Totally a hippogriff! Make it like Buckbeak! That should be Naruto's pet, and it will defend him bravely!
lalo80 chapter 13 . 7/20/2013
Porfa continualo pronto
downtown.baby chapter 3 . 7/8/2013
Ha...I hate Sakura and Sasuke. YOU ROCK THOUGH!
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