Reviews for Clover's Angel |
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NitroNorm5688 chapter 2 . 3/23/2017 Pretty good so far. Wish there was more |
Paradox Seekeress chapter 2 . 8/15/2016 Oooo nice please continue xD |
BOBthieBomber chapter 2 . 8/21/2013 I like the idea of this story. I would want to see what happens next could you please soon update this story. |
Da Ninja chapter 1 . 4/22/2013 BAD THINGS ABOUT YOUR FIC: 1-Really bad grammar and lots of typos. 2-Its very OOC...I can't imagine Wolverine saying "you can count on me, pal" to Professor X. 3-Your making Alex into a Mary-Sue...Seriously: "cat ears", "monkey tail", along with katannas, cat-suits and most of all really long silver hair with pink streaks and red (oops, I mean CRIMSON)... 4-You don't separate the authors notes from the story. 5-Your writing is boring, monotonous and clumped into long paragraphs. 6-Plot hole: How would Magneto know about Alex, he doesn't have a Cerebro, nor is he a telepath or have any working for him. GOOD THINGS ABOUT YOUR FIC: 1-Ummm... I LOVE that picture of Optimus Prime you have! SO PLEASE BURN THIS FOR THE SAKE OF HUMANITY! |
A Wombat chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 Come on update the story you've done a great job so far don't stop! |
Defcon-Emma chapter 2 . 2/13/2013 her suits venom |
A Wombat chapter 2 . 10/15/2012 Dude it's been 2 years so can please try to update? |
readingisdabest chapter 2 . 8/7/2012 Update soon, this story is AWSOME |
SakuraDragomir chapter 2 . 4/1/2011 hey waz up can u write more of this story plz? if u can i love totally spies and x-men:evolution i hope i can read more of yur stories ttyl -yuuki kuran queen of the night |
Kyubi9 chapter 2 . 3/5/2011 HI YA Kyubi9 here saying I really like this story so I really hope you update soon. Well Thats All For Now SEE YA! |
Projekt-Z chapter 2 . 1/14/2011 interesting. i think you should add a new love interest though... |
Raven34link chapter 2 . 11/12/2010 awesome with the make-out session, but too many 'as' in this chapter |
Raven34link chapter 1 . 11/12/2010 you didn't get the way the characters acted and talk right, they all sound like the same person, they sound like robots, what the hell did you do to Clover and you put waaaaaaaay too many 'as' in this chapter seriously half of the chapter was the word 'as' and you don't have to repeat one thing so many times sorry if i'm acting like a bitch :( |
Sasuke The Run Away chapter 2 . 11/1/2010 Please read & review: 'X-Men Evolution: Violet' Wow, this is mega awsome! Did you know that you are the only one who wrote a fanfic with X-Mean and Totaly spies? Thats totaly cool! Lucky! I love this! Great job! |
GrimlockX4 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010 I like how you gave Clover a Symbiote suit, Wolverine's claws, healing factor and his Adamantium skeleton. :) Good luck on the next chapter and on your other stories too! |