Reviews for Clover's Angel
NitroNorm5688 chapter 2 . 3/23/2017
Pretty good so far. Wish there was more
Paradox Seekeress chapter 2 . 8/15/2016
Oooo nice please continue xD
BOBthieBomber chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I like the idea of this story. I would want to see what happens next could you please soon update this story.
Da Ninja chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
BAD THINGS ABOUT YOUR FIC:

1-Really bad grammar and lots of typos.

2-Its very OOC...I can't imagine Wolverine saying "you can count on me, pal" to Professor X.

3-Your making Alex into a Mary-Sue...Seriously: "cat ears", "monkey tail", along with katannas, cat-suits and most of all really long silver hair with pink streaks and red (oops, I mean CRIMSON)...

4-You don't separate the authors notes from the story.

5-Your writing is boring, monotonous and clumped into long paragraphs.

6-Plot hole: How would Magneto know about Alex, he doesn't have a Cerebro, nor is he a telepath or have any working for him.

GOOD THINGS ABOUT YOUR FIC:
1-Ummm...
I LOVE that picture of Optimus Prime you have!

SO PLEASE BURN THIS FOR THE SAKE OF HUMANITY!
A Wombat chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Come on update the story you've done a great job so far don't stop!
Defcon-Emma chapter 2 . 2/13/2013
her suits venom
A Wombat chapter 2 . 10/15/2012
Dude it's been 2 years so can please try to update?
readingisdabest chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
Update soon, this story is AWSOME
SakuraDragomir chapter 2 . 4/1/2011
hey waz up

can u write more of this story plz? if u can

i love totally spies and x-men:evolution

i hope i can read more of yur stories

ttyl

-yuuki kuran

queen of the night
Kyubi9 chapter 2 . 3/5/2011
HI YA Kyubi9 here saying I really like this story so I really hope you update soon.

Well Thats All For Now SEE YA!
Projekt-Z chapter 2 . 1/14/2011
interesting. i think you should add a new love interest though...
Raven34link chapter 2 . 11/12/2010
awesome with the make-out session, but too many 'as' in this chapter
Raven34link chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
you didn't get the way the characters acted and talk right, they all sound like the same person, they sound like robots, what the hell did you do to Clover and you put waaaaaaaay too many 'as' in this chapter seriously half of the chapter was the word 'as' and you don't have to repeat one thing so many times sorry if i'm acting like a bitch :(
Sasuke The Run Away chapter 2 . 11/1/2010
Please read & review: 'X-Men Evolution: Violet'

Wow, this is mega awsome! Did you know that you are the only one who wrote a fanfic with X-Mean and Totaly spies? Thats totaly cool! Lucky! I love this! Great job!
GrimlockX4 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
I like how you gave Clover a Symbiote suit, Wolverine's claws, healing factor and his Adamantium skeleton. :)

Good luck on the next chapter and on your other stories too!
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