please can you write its sequel

amazing!

as usual ;)

I really love this onefic! You really have an aptitude for writing, with or without the fancy 'pirate' sentences (:

You should truly keep it up! Angst is sometimes the only way teenagers can understand what their feelings are all about. It's like therapy; like the lyrics of songs that describe what you're feeling.

I shall repeat what I've said before; I really love this onefic!

(:

What I say to stories I like 98-100% :

TASTY. Yum.

Really all depressing, still, short about this never-ending "?" WHY!

XD

Makes me really want to find some "happy-end" stories about them, no matter how idealistic they are.

Oh, and I COULD cite every section of fic, and say smth like "lol" but I think you'll get it anyway.

::POINTS A POINTY FINGER:: YES! THAT!

*Naruto fears hatred so much: has a terror of feeling it, actually, since he's managed to twist his psyche into believing it was acceptable for him to be subjected to it.*

::thumbs up::

*Naruto's underneath the underneath sometimes has other underneaths underneath it, but in other instances the depth isn't there at all.*

::snorts:: It's funny 'cause it's true.

*Kakashi has long since stopped carrying Icha-Icha Paradise around to read it in the public; he mostly just has it to convince the public that his mind is being otherwise occupied and to 'please' fuck off.*

::THUMBS UP::

*"How can they do it to us?" Naruto asks, with definite undertone of screaming inside his head. "How can they make us care for them so crazily and just leave?""

...you know. that's a good point. ::ponderponder:: crazy Uchiha's and their fanbase

*So much time gone into stabilising himself enough to function through a day of socialising, and he has nothing to show for it. What socialising?*

lol

*Kakashi kind of doubts Naruto has the skill to commit suicide even if he would try. Which he wouldn't, because he is fucked-up in the head like that.*

OMG. LOLOL. Yeah. This is great Kakashi pov. XD

I get to the end of the fic and can just go, "o snap." 'cause it is, really.

Nice fic! Thank you for sharing it!

Woah, that was good. In the sense of "does what it should"-i.e. I'm now depressed and desperately want to give both those guys a hug.

You've got a real gift for creating mood.