Reviews for Operation: FRAGMENT
ManwithaPlan113 chapter 19 . 5/6
Hmmm a year behind but hell. If ya returned after 9 years one more ain’t gonna be too bad I suppose
DJman248 chapter 19 . 2/23
Pretty good fic right here! Hope to see more soon!
Leon Venxus chapter 4 . 2/18
"special packagedelivery day"

"doctor"

who's pregnant?
Guest chapter 19 . 2/7
Wow! I can’t believe that you’re back! I reread the whole doc, including the new chapters, in a day. Can’t wait to see what you have in store for the future!
numbah435spiritsong chapter 19 . 1/20
Hi! I recently got back into the KND fandom out of nostalgia and your story is really good! I hope you plan to continue, I love the plot and the character development. Looking forward to another chapter!
Sage Is Kaldur'ahm chapter 19 . 12/24/2019
Because they all remind you of Numbuh 2! Damn Abby you got it BAD! I wonder what'll open the floodgates: more Nigel/Kuki interaction or Wally/Kuki. I think I figured out what's going on with the kids I just don't where Mack, Whistler, or Leo(?) fit in. Is Patty really an OC?
I hope you update it's been awhile since I've been invested in a KND fic
Toxicthecat4836 chapter 19 . 10/8/2019
This is super good! I really like how the characters are written and the suspenseful mystery. Please continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
Hello, are you there?
I’ll be seeing you.
-A.C.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/19/2019
Honestly, a really well thought-out story for such a simple idea and so little to work with. Loving how you balance all the characters out equally. A solid 10/10, would love to see more chapters soon.
godess bubbles chapter 19 . 8/12/2019
I really love this story! And can I just say I love the relationship between the Beatles brothers, sure it's not the best but you can see that they care about each other. I hope to see the original sector v gain their memories back soon, I would live to see the reaction of the new sector v!Update soon!
2ilver8ox chapter 19 . 7/31/2019
Abby is a fan of Nori!Number 2 without even knowing it! This is such a cool chapter! Love the actions scenes!
charmedprincess101 chapter 19 . 7/31/2019
Oh how I wish Abby and Hoagie would come together and solve this case. I would love to see more interactions between the two. If only they could see eye to eye.

I also like the new Sector V, they seemed like a fun bunch of characters. Especially the combat specialist of the group. She’s awesome!

Awesome chapter!
Guest chapter 19 . 7/23/2019
okay, i didn't expect another update from you for another few years just because whenever a writer says they're back, they usually post one chapter and then disappear again for another couple of years soo i'm pleasantly surprised to see another chapter so soon! thank you for updating! i love the scene with kalani and abby. it was just so kids next door lmao very fun to read
shejams chapter 19 . 7/23/2019
OMG! I thought I was seeing things when I saw that this was updated. I’m not here much on FFnet, I’m more over at the AO3 site. (they have some excellent Batman fanfiction, I’m almost obsessed)

Anyway… when I saw that this was updated, I was a little hesitant to read because I was afraid to see an AN stating: Sorry, this is all you get. So just imagine my surprise and joy seeing that not only was that not the case, there were TWO chapters added. I literally sat and stared at it for at least ten minutes and then decided to read it from the beginning.

I AM SO GLAD I DID! I completely fell in love with this story again. I love those kids still and the love and attention you give them is awesome. Not to mention the mystery aspect.
OOHH, I love a good mystery. Another reason I’m happy that I read it from the beginning is that, now that I’m older and wiser (yeah, I’m a grandma to a 3yr old now) I’m picking up more clues on what could be going on.

One thing I realized why Numbuhs 1-5 are having so much more of a difficult time than say Rachel, Fanny, Patton and even Sonia and Lee, to name a few, has something to do with their last mission. I’m thinking may be their decommissioning had to be a bit extra, or at least, a little different because of it. Now, I maybe way off base, but that’s the vibe I’m getting. LOL
Also the slugs.. Is Father using the slugs to “Delightify” kids? The Devourer? And for some reason I’m thinking Whistler and Mack are Teens Next Door assigned to watch over the original Sector V. Hmmmmm

I’m getting very excited for more. The interactions between the characters is so ….. engaging(?) that it just pulls me in this story. I love how all the relationships are being reformed.

And YAY! Nigel is starting to get somewhere with it all. Lizzie is acting so suspiciously, like she knows what’s up.

Double YAY! Hoagie seems like he’s getting his confidence back. I love how he stood up to Abby and even how he interacted with Balooka. He didn’t seem like a pushover to me. He’s on his way to being Numbah 2 again. Sighs

I just LOVED Kalani’s action scenes. I loved her “spar” with Abby. And I loved how Abby still got it!

Gah, I LOVE this! I really do. I’m eagerly looking forward to more.

Thanks so much for coming back. And happy writing and reno to you.

Peace,
shejams
timijaf chapter 19 . 7/19/2019
Great chapter
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