| Reviews for Not Quite A Storybook Romance |
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   Fiocchi10 chapter 1 . 11/6/2016 Omg I thought I've reviewed this before! Anyway, I love it so muchhhhh. It's soooooooo cute how do you even describe cuteness xD |
| Katherine A. Jones chapter 1 . 9/21/2014 Aw, that was adorable! And I have no idea what you mean by it being terrible, because that was amazing. |
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 7/11/2014 Oh, nice job, France! xD first made Alfred jealous then made Arthur confess... Great! |
| AEngland chapter 1 . 11/4/2013 Ohhhh, I just love this. And YAY for happy endings! |
| MayBell Lyric chapter 1 . 9/8/2013 cute :3 |
| PeachyM00NShine chapter 1 . 1/1/2013 :D |
| MiaLawliet chapter 1 . 8/8/2012 At first I was thinking I had misread the summary and it actually said onesided!UsUk, and as much as I love France, I wanted to punch him in the face at some point there. But then... BAAAAM. USUK. YES. So cute at the end! UsUk will prevail :D ((sorry for the randomness of this review, it's three in the morning)) |
| MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 1/8/2012 Ssssh! Alfred you're in a library! That's really cute! I love how Francis was making Arthur blush over Alfred and it was making our little American jealous. Oh jealousy... Oh awkwardness... *sigh*:D -Ash |
| Luna Calamity chapter 1 . 12/15/2011 D'awwwww adorable one shot XD I loved the small fluff and cheese lol it was worth it. I also love when people put the hetalia characters in a high school setting XD Is so kayoot (hooray misspellings) Anyway, can't wait for another story :) I might look through your other ones when I get the time XD |
| Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 8/22/2011 Stalker!Alfred and nervous!Artie are awesome! Also matchmaker!France win. 3 |
| Midnight Ghost chapter 1 . 7/9/2011 Stalker!Alfred FTW. And in the end, there's enough fluff to stuff a matress with~ Not that I mind though, it was so cute! |
| Teenage Mouse chapter 1 . 5/24/2011 There was NO WAY these guys were OOC. This is one of the best, cutest, sweetest, loveliest, most kawaii desu one-shots I've ever read! God, it makes my heart hurt it's so adorable! Usually I'm not a huge fan of stories like this. I mean, I don't think I've ever praised a fic for being kawaii desu. But you wrote it so well - it really worked, even though it was just fluff. It was WELL-WRITTEN fluff, and that's fairly rare. It's not just that it's a nice, happy little story. I also enjoy the way you tell it - it's not too mushy and sappy, the relationship developped realistically (I mean they didn't just fall in love at first sight and get together the next day - I hate stories like that!), and the characterisation was done really well! Don't doubt yourself! |
| Hana1225 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011 So cuuutee! Hoho...yay for Alfred stalking Arthur... |
| voldemortsfanfiction chapter 1 . 10/4/2010 d'aww, so cute~ I loved this, especially the ending |
| Empress Vegah chapter 1 . 7/7/2010 OH MY GAHD! INTENSE FLUFF! I couldn't help but giggle and laugh all throughout the story! This mood was so so lighter than the previous one I've read! The fluff is so nice that my heart flutters every time Alfred struggles with his effort to remove the acquaintance status between them! And oh, the jealousy that churns at his gut, whenever he sees Arthur and Francis together, is so cute! Good thing Alfred has indeed penetrated Arthur's heart. I am so happy for him! ~ |
