The way you write is one of a kind. You seem to break all the conventional rules, but it works. I really felt bad for the creature there. It was already injured, so why did he have to kill it? Great job here.

I Really like the way you use your words, they're very deliberate and poetic. But I wish you had used better punctuation because I sometimes felt lost with out it. Very good.

Very interesting! :) The detail you write with is phenomenal, and this story was very passionate and profound. Excellent work.

This is only oneshot? Please continue or create more of stories.

I am so envy Hope. That scene is worth to die for. I must stop breathing, too. XD

(Run! Hope! run for your life! Do not let her catches and tortures until you have to beg for death!)