Reviews for My Undefined
Guest chapter 3 . 1/11/2015
Chloe still blames Clark for jimmy dead. But Clark plan work. If Oliver did not betray Clark. Then Davis would have been take away. And every thing would be fine,

And Chloe did betray Clark and Oliver
noellesullivan chapter 7 . 12/16/2014
Wow. Great fic!
malugargula chapter 7 . 7/21/2013
Great fic
Really unexpected that Mrs. Kent was the one behind the scenes
Wonderful plot
And I really really hope you write a Chloe/Oliver/Lex fic :)
whatweareafreaidof chapter 7 . 5/14/2012
Chloe/Oliver/Clark be nice to see chloe with clark
PuckerUpSmile chapter 7 . 1/4/2011
noooo no love triangles i beg of u...though chloe/ollie/lexie dosent sound that bad lol so sorry its been so long. havent logged in for some time as the finished chap was updated sept 25 10 and rite now its jan 5 11. lol But I LOVED! The ending omg great way. didnt see that comin and really anything ur writing...chloe/oliver wise. im reading so be hearing from me later bye! keep up the great wrk, sad with this one done, but happy to read another...love the Olivers blonde moment lol have quiet a few of them myself. :D
ladyevenstar22 chapter 7 . 11/16/2010
i liked it, although i was a bit confused at the end, it wasnt clear that she wasnt trapped in a real place, plus not knowing who camille is and her powers, is she a real smallville character? oh but mrs kent! nice touch reminds me of that episode where we led to believe the red queen was tess when in fact it was clark's mom!
ladyevenstar22 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
very interesting beginning, i've been toying with idea of reading a chlollie fic, but couldnt bother, i'm all for clois, but was in the mood for smtg different yet still smallville, ur story is the chosen one, and i'm hooked , off to read the rest!
sjww chapter 7 . 11/7/2010
just read the whole story and have to say I thoroughly enjoyed your writing

I loved the twist at the end as well as the whole ollie/chloe build up...didnt think/suspect Mrs Kent either :-)

Great story..
Lady Catherin chapter 7 . 10/8/2010
I enjoyed your story very much. I lost all track of time while reading it! LOL
Myrle 16 chapter 7 . 10/4/2010
?

WHAT?

I THOUGHT FOR SURE IT WAS GONNA BE , ...

AWSOME LAST MINUTE TWIST!
Myrle 16 chapter 6 . 10/4/2010
WHAT THE HELL?
Myrle 16 chapter 5 . 10/4/2010
WHY DOES CHLOE ALWAYS HAVE TO DO THE STUPIDLY BRAVE THINGS?
Myrle 16 chapter 3 . 10/4/2010
JUSTIN?

YOUR STRETCHING MY SMALLVILLE MEMORY!

GREAT STORY SO FAR, AND IM LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE!
FranS chapter 7 . 9/29/2010
i love this fanfic...

i thing you have to do a chloe/olliver/clark triangle!
Snapplelinz chapter 7 . 9/28/2010
Wow, great ending to this story, aquaxeyes. I'm a little confused with the ending and Martha's connection to Justin (maybe I missed a step in the story itself), but it was a awesome cliffhanger anyway. When it said 'fiery hair', I almost thought it was Tess, lol. So the prison place where Chloe was being kept throughout the story, it was all in her mind, right? Sounds very "Inception" to me, but I like it ; ) Great story, great pairing. Major props : )

PS: Thanks for the mention in your A/N.
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