omg I cried at the very end x3 (ppst, I cried at everything ._.)
You did an amazing work! I really do enjoy reading it c:

Not cute, but so sad and very well written.

That was cute

wow! so lovely!

i dont think Jack was ooc, he was definately the most emotional of he brothers so it made sense to me. But I like this, I like the thought, because i can see if they were together, this could have happened.

Aw, it was cute... Well, save for the dying part. I really liked it! :p