Stop with the childish and ridiculous Author Notes, and work on your English.

Work on your English instead of writing ridiculous and unprofessional author notes.

Trunks and Gotten are evil. ...well just Trunks. I think Gotten is adorable

please update

"Yeah, the owners of Capsule Corps are even richer than my dad!"
And, given that Kami was an ancient green alien that lived an ascetic lifestyle both were richer then the dbz god of earth

So, this is actually the first DBZ Fic I have ever read. Thought it'd be a humurous fic but all I see is total wish fufillment on your end. Saiyan Soul Bonds where partners can talk telepathically, Gohan being stronger than Vegeta even though Gohan is much weaker than he was against Cell, Vegeta was also an SSJ2 at this point in time and Pan being born in the future time line because it's your story and you can do whatever you want. Pan was born after Majin Buu Saga, the Androids wreaked Havoc waaaay before then. I find it hard to believe Gohan and Videl ever would've hooked up or even survived till that point honestly.

In one of your earlier chapters you were asking for reviews because your Fic is good. I don't really think so. I don't think any of the Z-Fighters have ever cared about the public seeing them using their power, Gohan is the exception in School and that quickly goes out the window in front of everyone at the WT. So why does everyone seem to care here?

Not trying to bash, this fic could be dead already for all I know. I never really looked, just trying to say your taking to many liberties with very little explanation if that makes sense? Even if this is a trolly humor fic.

Why did Trunks overreact to 18? I understand you said it was not canon but the jokes/plot that come from your story still should coincide with canon- Trunks was there when Krillin wished for the bombs to be taken out of the androids and therefore should have been aware of Krillin's feelings and the possible outcomes.

If Trunks was 13 when Future Gohan died, and Pan was 4, doesnt that mean that since Trunks spent 2 days in the Hyper Bolic Time Chamber and that he went to the normal timeline when he was 16 that Pan should be 7? I mean, you did say Trunks was 18.

the story is looking nice, I look forward to reading other chapters.

OK ether these chapters are very short or I read to fast ether way I'm pised but still

TREE SAPPY:3:3:3 sorry but I had to:(

hit on bulma or pass himself

Great chap! Keep up the good work.

THIS IS STORY IS GREAT.

I know yamcha is weak, but pan should not be able to even scratch him.