| Reviews for Toujours Pur |
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   ScOut4It chapter 6 . 12/11/2011 Oh well. |
| ScOut4It chapter 5 . 12/11/2011 I liked the "Now you're mine" part and that they seemed to have shared the feeling of the experience. But then you make it seem like Bella was trying to help stop this charm, which doesn't seem true. I have a feeling this lingering 'Bellatrix-ness' is going to get Narcissa into some trouble. If she's going to turn into 'a scarlet woman' ;) then I hope it's with Lily and not some boy. |
| ScOut4It chapter 4 . 12/11/2011 Bellatrix is so mean. This part was pretty good: /Bella, encouraged and more turned on, sat up straighter and looked down at Narcissa. "Do you want me to?" She asked deviously. Her smile abated and a look of pure hunger shone in her eyes./ It was nice to have a moment where Bellatrix wasn't all teasing, but had something tangible show from beneath the surface. |
| ScOut4It chapter 3 . 12/11/2011 A difficult transition into the uncharted territory. I think you managed navigating it pretty well. |
| ScOut4It chapter 2 . 12/11/2011 Good call on Bellatrix's methods of interrogation. Poor Narcissa for being ignorant of what is necessary to defend herself against that. Right now I can't tell what direction your going to take this, but that's part of the fun isn't it? ;D I hope for Narcissa's sake that Bellatrix isn't all sociopath. Right now it's looking like Narcissa's future is rather questionable. |
| ScOut4It chapter 1 . 12/11/2011 Narcissa's crush is so very cute. I enjoyed how she blushed and started doodling a star. Nice writing on Narcissa just lunging at her sister and not having a plan because she was already so overwhelmed by her thoughts and feelings of the day. |
| Smayz chapter 6 . 6/15/2011 Haha, I love how Cissy thought that she was under a love spell. |
| madonnelly chapter 1 . 4/12/2011 This story is excellent! Well written and engrossing. |
| withegoldendust chapter 6 . 3/9/2011 I'm not really a fan of this pairing but this story is totally interesting.I hope you'll update soon. :) |
| Maddie chapter 6 . 3/8/2011 Great story!Hope you update soon!(: |
| saphique chapter 1 . 2/12/2011 This is one of my most favorites fanfics so far about young Bella and young Cissy. The character evolution of Narcissa is amazing, for the descriptions of the changes she is experiencing. great writing, very! Really "upsetting" and surprising ;) |
| comebacksirius chapter 6 . 9/15/2010 I hope you'll continue this story, it's so good. |
| comebacksirius chapter 3 . 9/15/2010 Awesome! |
| comebacksirius chapter 2 . 9/15/2010 This story is amazing! |
| Eryk Lestrange chapter 6 . 6/2/2010 keep up the good work! |
