good taste

Damn, is that Ash Ketchum, Pussy Slayer Extraordinaire?

Great Story. It was fun and I had blast reading him...
Thanks for the awesome Story.
Advanceshipping forever

This is by far my favorite fanfiction, however one thing I will say is that May’s character went from bitchy to more in line with her character in the actual anime. It’s like Ash’s character development but for May. Minus the development. Other than that, this is a great fanfic.

My most favourite Fanfiction till now. Love it so much. Read 4 times.
Every Character is Awesome.
Dark Ash was so cool. I'll miss Dark Ash. Although he might still be a bit dark.
BEST ADVANCEDSHIPPING FANFICTION.
Don't listen to the damn critics.
Ash Character was perfectly utilized.
Someone said that Ash here is a winnie, because of rejection and Mother dying, thats not true.
Ash had suffered back to back negativity

Great Story, but I think the Dark-Ash character progression was rushed. The story was written amazingly tho. This story is one of my favorites tbh.

well fucking hate this story, it started out good and shit until he started following Brock's rule or what ever over a pormise

Let me amend my last Review. This Ash REQUIRES more then one word to describe him.

What you consider 'Dark' I would personally consider 'Needlessly cuntish' He is a pathetic whiny little shit bag that keeps on being rude and frankly mean for no other reason then

"oh my mummy died and my crush rejected me" Boo-Fucking-Hoo.

Breaking the Law is Cool!
Assaulting people is Cool!
Crushing dreams of Kids are Cool!
MAKING LADIES CREAM WITH A LOOK IS COOL!
This Ash is so COOL!

If I had to describe this Ash in one word... I think it would be: Pathetic

nice

Can you make more of the Advanceshipping fanfiction ?

This was a fantastic read well done

was q a good story but i felt that the ending didnt really make up for the how many chapters of dark ash there were, as in that the story never really showed why he started to change :/ but good job anywaysss

with all respect, may don't have any right to be angry to ash considering that all this situation was her fault, because her attitude toward ash in the beginning was nasty and cruel, she don't have any good reason to treat ash badly, and even he lose his titles because her and he lose everything and she expect that he forgive her easily after she done to him?

She brought herself the insults of ash, because he suffered so much and lose everything because her, then he had the right to lash out to may her betrayal and cruel actions that cost to ash his dreams and after this insults, she ends harboring a grudge to ash? This show that may wasn't a sweet and kind girl, she is a bitch that don't have qualms in throw to the trash to others if she consider that they aren't worthy of her.

Personally, ash is the victim here and may the true culprit, because she was whom start this issue without any good reason, destroying to ash and after that ash scold her, she harbor a grudge in him than harbor a regret, remorse or guilt for the outcome.

Don't get me wrong, but i was hoping that ash already buried any crush in may, because after her actions, she prove herself don't deserve the love of ash.

That was a great fic.