Reviews for After Dark
HoneyBee1 chapter 2 . 6/27/2018
To everyone who actually checking the reviews, I apologize for being crass because someone actually being a rude reviewer and I reacted badly. I shouldn't do that, I should just delete his comment. I don't appreciate rudeness. I welcome constructive feedback, just like others. But an entitled reader is not why I write fics. There are ways to give constructive feedback. Obviously, there are ways to respond. Mine is a poor one. Sometimes people don't realize you write fics for fun, and on your own time, without being paid. This is a thankless job. I don't expect good reviews all the time but I do expect manners. Writing is a process that often undergoes heavy edits… that includes responding to feedback. But while there are some crappy and entitled readers, there are also many brilliant ones and I’m so grateful for them. Thanks to those who read and giving your time to review.
HoneyBee1 chapter 1 . 6/27/2018
First of all, Sam. I don't need to do jack shit. You, on the other hand, need to learn the fanfiction reviewer manner. I don't write the fic for you, and obviously, this is the first time you've been in a fanfiction community. Learn the goddamn guidelines of being a reviewer. Those are not constructive feedback, more like a demand. So you can shove off. Remember this.
Guest chapter 13 . 2/14/2016
Please update, you haven't updated in ages!
cobalt-blue chapter 13 . 12/9/2015
Just finished this. I really like the way you're exploring the characters. Obviously, there are some betaing issues, and sometimes I get the feeling that English, or at least American English is not your first language. But it's good, it's REALLY REALLY good. I've only recently started writing in this fandom, and I'm mainly doing it as a palate cleanser for my non fan writing, but I'm enjoying the heck out of it. Looking forward to more updates when you feel like watching the movies again.

BTW- have you noticed that a great deal of John Williams' soundtrack for Harry Potter sounds like his soundtrack for Jaws and Jaws II?
Guest chapter 13 . 9/9/2015
please please please update, you haven't updated this in ages
Dylan chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
New to fan fiction, loving this chapter, will have to keep reading the other chapters before I catch up. So annoyed that I haven't found this story sooner, please updatr, you're an amazing writer, keep going with this story please. P.s only just found out that you can comment and not have an account, lol. I might get one though after this hehe
Guest chapter 13 . 7/13/2015
Please update soon
cardiff1984 chapter 11 . 5/23/2015
I hope you continue the story soon. The Shark attack has changed the course of the surviving teens decisions for the future. Will Lucy become a nun or return to Patrick? The Larry/Tina love story will go right to the wire.

Please update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
please please please update you're taking forever and I really love you're story
cassidyannelee chapter 13 . 5/14/2015
Hey, great story, I'm so annoyed that I've only just found this. I've always wondered what would have happened to the kids after the attack. real or not. And you've hit the nail on the head with this. love it if you need any ideas or suggestions, please feel free to pm me and keep up updating. You're an amazing writer and would love for you to continue this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
please update, loving the story, you don't get to see what the aftermath is most of time, so this is great and i've always wondered how the kids would cope after it. Espically, Sean and wheather or not him and michael would start to bond. Like the bond he had with andy and whether the brody's would talk about it. great story keep it up!
cardiff1984 chapter 7 . 4/19/2015
This is really incredible! The after effects and experiences of the teenagers is well described in your continuation to Jaws II. Bravo!

Look forward to upcoming chapters
ste29amy chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
Am loving this story..I always wondered what might happen after jaws 2 but before 3.
Was hoping you might have some confrontations between Martin and the local committee and them admitting he was right after all... that kind of thing..and maybe the select men getting prosecuted ...you know? Abit of satisfaction for Martin. ..anyway..love the story keep it going.
cardiff1984 chapter 3 . 3/29/2015
Love the first three chapters of your story. The description on the after effects of the teenagers is really powerful. I can't say I blame Larry JR resenting his father for not putting the safety of him , his friends and the community, due to being in denial of a reoccurring shark attack. I like that the teenagers acknowledge Brody as a hero.

Look forward to the next chapters.
ThePizzadude93 chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
"If his dad wasn't there to saved him"? You might want to fix that.
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