Naruto is a pansy fag. Hope he gets cucked in the future.

i hope to see more eventually

Interesting chapter and story!

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow...,...
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Think you could give us an update on your "Bio Page" as to whether:

A) You've lost interest in writing.
B) Have RL kicking your backside, thus no time or energy.
C) Have a massive case of writer's block.
D) Other reasons.

As your "newest" update hails from Aug 27th, 2016, or close to 3 years ago, whereas your "eldest" update is Feb 16th, 2010 or over 9 years ago.

Meanwhile your "Favourite Stories " page shows activity as the youngest addition, was I think January of this year, otherwise late 2018.

So that rules out the "author has died" option, which was another consideration amongst the ones I listed above. (Far from impossible. After all Chilord died from Cancer, Paladeus was murdered [unsolved case AFAIK] and MikeJV37 died due to illness.)

Oh and as I'm rereading the "Rapture" story. You consider the Ice Plasmid too OP in a world where at minimum a house can be easily disintegrated (Sandaime Tsuchikage), someone can create a new Moon (Pein), summon forth a near unstoppable army of Super Zombies (Kabuto), call forth a massive meteor bombardment (Madara) or create entire dimensions or erase people from existence (Kaguya)?

Also how well would it work on Hidan? You freeze him, you shatter him, he gets sown back together.

Similar issue with the Edo Tensei crowd, who'd simply regenerate back into shape.

Hell, would it even work on someone like Haku, who has the Hyoton bloodline and as such isn't even effected by the cold and can at the least enter their own ice creations, if not all forms of ice that's thick enough?

So yeah, seems kinda silly to consider it OP, when you look at the Naruto universe "endgame" abilities.

Is this story still active? Probably not, but if at some point you do decide to update, just know that I am excited to see tsume's reaction to naruto's "children"

When I saw the crossover I was like how the hell is that gonna work... You did great.

I liked the chapter!

pls update this wonderful story good sir.

Great story my friend i cant wait for the next chapter.

so if hes getting sights from the other queens then hes being recognized as a queen, if that is whats happening

This is certainly more in depth than other crossovers from the two franchises. Looking forward to more.

Something I need to point out-"scared" means that you're frightened. "Scarred" means that you have scars. That needs fixing for just about every chapter Ibiki's in.

Hm... will Wave show up soon? Haku would be a pretty good teacher for showing him how to use Ice Release.

And with what caused the melting of the table-is that Boil Release that can do acid and whatnot?

Will the Kyuubi be showing up anytime soon? I'd really like to get its opinion on whats happening. And see if Naruto can throw a Facehugger down its throat in his mind.

Will Naruto EVER be able to teach Murasaki morality? Her knowing morality equates to the hive knowing it, so she's the most important one in that regard.

Did... did Murasaki and Sorairo come from anyone we know?

Well, this review has been a long time coming. I've had LLG open in my tabs since you've posted it.

Poor Anko, stuck on the forefront of the nonsense that is xenomorph biology. Have her summons met the hive yet, or more to the point has the hive comprehended the terrifying possibilities if they breed with a summon creature?

Considering Naruto has made no secret of the fact that he is being mentally influenced I'm surprised none of the villages mind readers have inspected what he's seen. Likewise I'd expect the girls to be interrogated after maiming a civilian, as a pretext to study there alien minds if nothing else.

Looking towards the future, with hokage learning of the hives staggering reproduction rate and Naruto's tenuous place it the hierarchy it seems like were almost at the point in an Alien story where somebody comes up with an ultimately ineffective way of controlling the Aliens.

Hope the the last year and a half have treated you well!