Edward really needs to wise up and realize that Bella is nothing but an inconsiderate, two timing bitch. She doesn't deserve him. She doesn't even consider his feelings in anything. Hell, she won't even hear him about Jacob being manipulative, or how Edward is clearly jealous and insecure. She just laughs at Edward and brushes his feelings off as if they weren't worth being considered, as if he was being absurd. Bitch, he may be a vampire, but he still has feelings that should be expressed, shared and cared for, not dismissed as a bad joke. Thoughtless hag!

Bella is nothing but an inconsiderate, two timing bitch. She doesn't deserve Edward what so fucking ever. She never tooK his feelings into consideration or anything. Just scoffed at them, and practically told him to deal with it. Edward wise the fuck up and leave her. She isn't worth it.

l. l.l Pl r

What a tremendous disappointment it is to discover there's no next chapter! I really like this insecure jelous Edward, he seems more real than Edward seen through Bella's eyes. I wished you finished this adaptation, it feels like a cliff-hanger now. Please?

Epic. Looking forward to the other chapters. I really enjoyed reading this book. Thank you.

Noooooooooo!

great book i missed Edward parts in twilight series thanks for writing

awesome try...
good..!

So car so good. I love this. It is great. Well worth the read.

Please finish it! I loved it Thank you!

That was REALLY REALLY good, but can you PLEASE PLEAE PLEASE finish the book

It's amazing but why is it unfinished? A very interesting piece with no ending...*Sigh*

U need to finish!

Erica, I have to say that I liked better your version than the original book! I swallowed it up in 2 nights! Congratulations, you have talent! :)))))
Denise

Great version! Please complete! I've been losing sleep reading this!