This story sort of hits home with me. My friend's mom just passed away. She was battling lung cancer for a really long time, and she was only 55. This is so beautifully written, and there was something about it that was so ethereal. Good job!

wow interesting twist and really good(e)!

wow this is sad. but very good.

.Gosh. This has got to be *the* saddest Zach story I've ever read. But it was utterly awesome. I hope you write more... maybe about his dad or his brother?

aww i liked it :) sad but goode!

loved it. write another! :D

Oh. My. Gosh. I love Zachs mom. And I really like this one-shot, cause everyone always has people die for spy-related reasons, but she didnt.

Zach was a cutie in this. I like when him and his mom are talking about love.

The rain-theme was cute. I like how she died at the drought.

The phone fell out of her hand to the ground and a moment later she fell with it.

Wow. That line was awesome. Its kinda sad how Zach was on the phone when she died :/

You should write more, definantly. This was beast. And I like how it revolved more around Zach than Zammie. Very awesome.

This was so beautiful. I loved it. Zach's mom is awesome. And Zach is cute.

"The moon it's not hanging where it should be."

I liked his mom up until there. For a second I was wondering if she was going crazy. But I'm assuming that statement had some sorda signifigence to it.

"I know mom, you keep telling me that and you know what maybe I'll ended up running into her in an elevator at a classified place."

-sighs- Oh, Zach...:)

this is amazing, you know that right? I absolutely loved it. The last line wrapped it up nicely. I liked how you did Zach's mom. This fic was different and it's definitely unique and creative. Loved it :) Nice job

~diva~