Reviews for Haunting Pains
iEliteRoyale chapter 1 . 3/26
Ed and Winry have the cutest relationship!
And I love how oblivious Al was the entire time...
Overall, great story! I learned a thing or two about phantom pain while reading this. The angst and fluff was perfect, and your writing style made it all the more beautiful.
Lacila chapter 1 . 1/9/2018
AWWW THIS WAS SO INCREDIBLY CUTE! I loved the way you described the phantom pains, and I also loved that super cute hug! this is such a good story!
justanotherdreamgirl chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
That was so cute at the end! But I'm happy that Ed finally told about his pains to Winry, and got some help.
paracuties chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Aww! I'm finding I smile really, really widely by the time I get to the end of your stories because they are just. So. Sweet.

Keep up the good work!
ThreeKittiesDancing chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Great story! There are so few FMA stories (surprisingly) that deal with Ed suffering from Phantom Limb Syndrome, so it was wonderful to find your story, and it was handled so touchingly. It was just a bit rushed towards the end, when Ed claimed he was already okay, after only swallowing the pain pill a minute or two before, but besides that, everything fit so well with canon, it was great. (Ed would've had to have received an injection for the pain medicine to have worked that fast.). I loved how you kept Ed so in-character, as he tried to keep his problems hidden from everyone, especially Al, and then relived his guilt over his past actions. That's so Ed, but it's just sad that he has to go through so much much pain and misery. His brother does share the blame, no matter how much Ed wants to absolve him, so if he would just be honest about his problems, he wouldn't have to suffer by himself so much.

I loved the bit of sweet awkwardness between Ed and Winry at the end. It fit the both of them perfectly! Now Al is going to have something to tease his big brother with for awhile after this visit to Resembool.
movingdisaster chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
lol, i liked how realistic the characters are to the anime. - nice little story. very sweet. loved the drama.
gaap237 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
I love how clueless and innocent Al is
Me chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
I absolutely love this. This fanfiction is absolutely perfect! It is now my top favorite! Keep up the fantastic work! :D
MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Really cute! I haven't seen the haunting pains idea done before and I liked the way you wrote it. You did a great job of portraying EdWin and I intend to read it again in the future!

-Ash
Kipcha chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Aww, that was so sweet... And yet really sad at the same time. I've heard about that "phantom limb" thing, and how people have claimed to feel pain where they don't have a body anymore. I can't even imagine what that is like...

Anyways, love you fic!
Raven Wolfmoon chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
This was a great idea and a fantastic execution! Your writing is awesome and I love Winry and Ed! This story deserves more credit for sure! Wonderful!
FullMetalMechanist chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Oh my goodness! another amazing story! i loved the way you have the edward/winry moment at the end. also, i feel extremely sorry for ed. it is sad that he has to go through so much pain and suffering. still i love the story, honest to god, and i loved how you added the "you look cute when you're angry" bit for ed. it was hilarious! i hope there will be more of these stories in the future.
FullMetalMechanist chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Oh my goodness! another amazing story! i loved the way you have the edward/winry moment at the end. also, i feel extremely sorry for ed. it is sad that he has to go through so much pain and suffering. still i love the story, honest to god, and i loved how you added the "you look cute when you're angry" bit for ed. it was hilarious! i hope there will be more of these stories in the future.
linkluver3 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I LOVED THIS!

it was so sad and cry-ish and funny and cute and all in all amazing! It was adorable! The descriptions were so vivid! I can't even like find the right words to describe the awesomeness of this story! Amazing Job!
the.stories.live.on chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
This piece really connected with me. It was well done, and I applaud you.
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