Reviews for Ordinary World
Patricia Davis chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
That was so sad and yet i couldnt stop reading it they both made me cry.
Renn chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Wow...this was really sad, I could feel for him and while it's logical it never occurred to me that Vincent would still be there with Red XIII. Really cool, and really well written! Got a tear out of me - and perfect ending too, I wasn't disappointed! Thanks for sharing! )
Aurora-Kayd chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
That. Was. Beautiful. And brilliant. And amazing. And .. wow.

And I totally didn't know it was a sequel, so I'll definetly have to read that, but IT was So GOOD!. ::glomp::

Thank you for sharing!
Niara chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
*Sobs*
Mako-Magic chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
that was so gd! lovin it! i wonder how long he lived for?
nobusinesslikeshowbusiness chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
"That day when the sky died". I adored that. Love your work. Keep writing! _
Lora Helen chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
Absoloutely brillient!
Lora Helen chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
Absoloutely brillient!
Saesama chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
wow...this is a seriously beautiful fic. I love it.
obentoo chapter 1 . 1/29/2003
so, so sad. *sniff* yeah, vin sur can ramble on, in a nice morbid way. mwahahahaha!
Crimson Sun chapter 1 . 9/26/2002
I cannot believe you did not get more reviews for this. I had been meaning to review this for ages...

How can you write something so sad and moving? So depressing that it could bring tears to the eyes? This is such a brilliant piece of work... If I could crown you Ruler of Angst, I would.

Keep writing. I am always checking your profile.
Castrata chapter 1 . 2/19/2002
*snifle* I just love your work!
Koi Lungfish chapter 1 . 2/7/2002
Well, it's been a long time since I read something that made me cry. Although your writing style is not exactly Booker Prize-level, this was deeply moving and a strong piece of work. Excellent!
Lira chapter 1 . 2/5/2002
*sniffs* SO SAD BUT SO GOOD! FINISH KOINONAYAMI!