*sniff* That was BEAUTIFUL *Claps loudly* outstanding, my dear. Keep up the great work. I'd like to see a sequel. Seriously, this was fantastic!

hey you yeah you writing this stuff, you amazing I NEED MORE YOU HEAR ME MORE

Beautiful.

I Love this story! It's the best lemon FanFic I've ever read! And I'm obsessed with Unohana and UkiUno too! I really love the storyline, it's really good. Don't stop writing, 'cause I'll always support you! :D

Your choice of words, very apt. I could see the scene through my eyes. Very well described. 8/10!

you got me wanting to know more...

it's nice.. i enjoyed reading your story. You are doing good with the M rated stories, you should write more...

I really wish you did sequel or just another UkiUno story. I'm obsessing over everything you wrote for Bleach fandom and gaaaawd I read them all MANY times, believe me XD this one is my favorite UkiUno story ever

/ignore the other review

absolutely awesome

continue. this story screams for a sequel

I liked it overall except for the end. Your talk about marriage seemed sudden and rushed (they just had sex for one time, even if they were attracted to each other for a while) and out of place. Plus, you really don't know anything about wealthy families, do you? Neither would have to leave their positions because nannies and staff would help raise the children. That's the way it has always been. So it was a good story except for the unrealistic end part.

Awww this was too cute and the "carpet doesn't match the drapes" line made me laugh

Signed,

Lemony

I'm so pervert that i read it :)It was very lemon...maybe because of it I like it SOOO much XD

This was so lovely! :)