Reviews for Broken Moonlight
Fastace2429 chapter 28 . 8/10
You have me curious is bella's mom going to make it or was it a rouse to split the witlock's up for a better chance at bella and what will the other cullens think about all this?
eo04 chapter 28 . 6/3
I know it's been years but please finish this! you just can't leave it like that... PLEASE
celajwhitney chapter 18 . 3/30
what crawled up Rose's ass and died? it's none of her damn business if Jasper's in love with a human. it has nothing to do with her. he's told them repeatedly that Peter, Char and Bella are his family now so she can't even use that.
jeoliverio chapter 28 . 3/2
Please continue this story, I have enjoyed reading it alot, plus I would love to know what Edward did with Bellas mother.
tinkermist99 chapter 28 . 11/23/2019
plz update
Auri on the Rooftops chapter 28 . 11/16/2019
I realise this story has likely been abandoned, but I really enjoyed reading it and just wanted to thank you for writing it! I enjoyed your characterisations of Bella and Jasper as more caring and positive than the relationship we get between Bella and Edward in the books. I also really appreciate your balance of plot with smut.

Thanks again for writing something so enjoyable and know that if you ever update you’ll have at least one eager and thankful reader!
Messypixie88 chapter 26 . 8/17/2019
I love this version of Jasper and Bella.
Briery chapter 28 . 6/28/2019
Sigh... I love them so and it’s all just hanging there waiting. I don’t know whether to cry or swear loud enough to frighten the neighbours
tercat57 chapter 27 . 6/9/2019
I've reread this so many times I've lost count :D I don't care that it's been years since you've updated. I hope, some day, you decide to come back and finish this. Love this story!
garcia127982 chapter 28 . 3/19/2019
Update please
tdetwilightlover chapter 19 . 2/20/2019
Ugh. I really enjoy stories where rose is actually super close with jasper and Bella and it’s difficult to read this ...

But also to this rose: fuck the royalist of fucking fucks off you judgy ass bitch. “Oh it’s wrong it’s wrong” YOURE THE ONE WHO FUCKING FELL IN LOVE WITH EMMETT WHEN HE WAS HUMAN. Jesus fuck this stupid argument pisses me off so fucking much like YOU WERE ALL HUMANS AT ONE TIME STOP BEING PRETENTIOUS ASSHOLES.
tdetwilightlover chapter 16 . 2/20/2019
Turn her turn her turn her. Jesus lord alright I stg vampires are dumb. She already said she wants to be will you all. Jesus fuck can we get some Damon Salvatore reactions for once up in here bc hot damn twilight vamps are D.E.N.S.E.
tdetwilightlover chapter 14 . 2/20/2019
I get the whole point of this story is to add drama buuuuuuut if they just turned her into a vamp bada bing bada boom problem solved
Kristina777 chapter 28 . 2/11/2019
Awesome story...I hope you finish it someday
NUCGIRL72 chapter 28 . 1/25/2019
Update
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