Amazing! I love your writing! I like the idea of a mute Arthur. Very different, but interesting on how he can still be himself without his voice. I also love how Arthur is like the KEY to beating Ivan. AND I love how you show that the faerie pendant's good charms, but effectively instill doubt by the numerous warnings. I'm a bit worried as to Arthur's promise. Will he have to sacrifice himself to save the Balance? O.o Anyways, love ur writing, and I hope u continue again!

OMG
I love this fanfic.

I so want to see Alfred and Ivan duke it out.

I love this story. I hope you only take a break and will finish it one day.

This is really well written. It's so upsetting that it looks like you've gone on quite the break from updating your work.

Hey so I know you have a life and stuff but I would really really really REALLY love it if you updated. I don't care if it's been 2 years since you updated, we all know updatings a pain, and also because I just found this story. Dispite the ship I absolutely love this story, the concept, the way you're able to portray the characters is A-ma-zing. I would love to see the ending.

Please tell me you're still continuing the story! I really like it!

I really really like this story! The plot is intriguing and easy to follow, the magic/abilities that the characters have are unique, and your writing style is engaging and really funny. However, I suggest that you either proofread or get a beta because there are a lot of simple, but easy to fix mistakes.

Oh, damn my luck.
How old is this? 2012? And I assume there is no chance I or any other person could persuade you to retake this story? This AU?
I mean, fuck the schedule. Nobody really cares that you had a hiatus as long as you start posting chapters. And I mean it.
Those Above gave you a gift and inspiration, and I see you wasting it. And that is not okay.
Until now, this story was everything I could hope for and more.

I see only 3 chapters left and I am worried...
it's 2015 and I am worried about what I'll find at the end of 23. If it's some bigass cliffhanger, so the Goddess help me, I'll write and draw for you and prod you with my words until you give us an end.
But let's hope for the best...let's hope this is finished...
I really want to see Arthur top. Like really, really, really, in this AU, and only in this one. I wanna see the Siren...

Uuuugh, Arthur is honestly pissing me right now.
This is not to say i have ANY CRITICISM, AT ALL. Your story is absolutely Fantastic and Otherwordly and reading it makes me feel so much better and calm and at peace. You'll find it weird, most likely, but reading it feels exactly like reading old Pagan poems. Fused with magic and power from the Gods...Your fanfic is very strange, like that. Why does it work this way? (I have a theory that your inspiration for this was a gift from above, but shhh...)
Anyway, Arthur annoys me because he probably traded something VERY important (that promise, harmful? I don't buy it) for that GODDAMN VERY USEFUL PENDANT. And now he's scared to use it? SCARED?
I bet he'll be able to use his full power once he puts that on.
(yeah, in real life I learned to write neatly in three differents fonts so I can make my point very well, no matter what, and the use of only one writing style is as frustrating as Arthur's muteness)

Oh, I can't wait to read more! Thank the Gods for so many chapters. I can and will enjoy myself a lot this last night of 2014.
Thank you so much for writing this fic, author!

I'm so so so glad that 12ish did not turn out to be true.
Praised be the gods above.

I just re-read this whole story again because I love it so much, and I miss it! This story is among the top of my all-time favorite fanfics! I'm so eager to see what's in store, now that Alfred knows his brother is missing. So many questions are running through my mind right now! Like: did Ivan intend for Alfred to find that out already, or is it all part of his twisted and sinister plan? Is the crew actually making progress on tracking him down, or are they heading into a trap? Did the deal Arthur make with the fairies going to come back and bite him in the ass? Too many questions! I'm crossing my fingers for an update soon (and praying that this isn't discontinued) but I'm not going to pressure you because I know that can be irritating and stressful to authors and this is 100% YOU'RE story, not ours...so what I'm getting at is that no matter what, you have a loyal fan waiting here if you should ever update this wonderful story (be it in 5 months or 5 years) And if you don't.. well, I'm still here, because even though I'm a grown-ass college student juggling school and jobs, I sadly always have time for fanfiction :)

I really do love this story.

(I feel I should say more but... It's taken a lot of effort to push past any shyness to just type that. :/ )

This story is well thought out and written. It's AWESOME. Post more, whenever it's convenient. You, my dude, have gotten another fanboy.

I kind of laughed, I mean, Iceland doesn't have ice powers! Love the change. AWESOME STORY!