I love good writing and this is a well written story. I also love the pairing of Ronon and Jen. As the writer, no doubt you have this story all worked out in your mind with an outline already done. Please, please finish this one. As a side note, once I find an author I like I try to find everything they have written. You are definitely worth following. Keep on keeping on! - Lynn Burrick

Please update I want to know what happens next. I really want them to get together

I really hope you finish this story. Its got a great plot!

I know how life tends to intrude on the fun, but I hope you continue with this story. It really is a pleasure to read. You are an excellent writer.

You wade through pages and pages of fic and every now and then you stumble on one like this. "..she staggered as the earth galloped beneath her feet..." You have a remarkable way with description. I'm hooked.

LOVE this story! I really enjoy how you develop the relationship between Jennifer and Ronon. I hope she isn't too injured after this cliff-hanger of an ending! lol But seriously, great writing. Can't wait to read more.

I loved your Lord of the rings story so I educated myself on Stargate just so I could read your other story!

I hope you keep writing!

please,please,please put up another chapter this is the best story i have read you have a wonderful writing style please i have to know what happens

This is a well-written story and you nailed the characters. As a fellow author, and huge fan of the characters, I am very much impressed. They are complex characters with complex relationships and very tricky to get right, but I could see them saying and doing the things in your story. I look forward to your next update!

Don't you dare stop here for months and months or your readers will take up a collection and hire a hit man.

No, I don't know how to find a hit man, but I'm sure one of the others has a cousin who does. Don't think this is a meaningless threat.

No pressure.

Oh this is excellent plz finish it follow it up with many more !

Oh, my god, I love your stories! I have been a devoted follower of this story and am very impressed with your ability to portray emotion and makes us FEEL it! Also, the cliff hanger is so well done that I'm not even that angry that I can't read the next chapter yet. Can't wait for what happens next!

A new chapter! This is fantastic! So exciting that you are continuing with the story! Ooo we devoted readers need another chapter posted after that, must know how it turns out!

Talk about a cliff hanger! Great update.

I was so excited to see that you've updated! You defiantly didn't disappoint! But I can't be leave you left it off there! Please don't watt as long between updates I need to know what happened to Jenifer!