This seems pretty good so far. It has a nice beginning & its not too rushed or forced.

Wow love this very much

I really enjoyed ur story :) I think ya did a good job with it. An I hope ya do more stories later on (especially stories that have OC with them like this one XD) Anyways good job!

omg love your story cant wait for the next chapter... please dnt kill kaylee off :S

*jaw drops* Oh crap. Please don't let her fall! :

Yikes : She's pregnant! Eeep!

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! We need moree :D

Aww poor girl :( Emmett did not react like how I thought he would.. Great update! :)

is this the end or is there a sequel or anythng...i wished she would hve made emmett sweat a little and prove himself...plus i liked the drama with tanya

How have you only got one review for this? It's amazing! I've struggled to find good Emmett/OC stories.. they are the best :) And I'm glad I found yours. I'm liking the way you write Emmett :) And I really hope you update soon!

why don't you have aby reviews yet? this is really good(: it's hard to find good EmmettOC stories or EmmettOC stories in general, haha. I like that Emmett is still jokey but serious and loving. you've got the perfect blend goin on.

I really like how you spell her name. it's unique, I've never seen it spelt like that before. I hope we get to see more of Tina. she was there for like 5seconds in one chapter. totally hoping that Kaylea gets Seth and Tina together.

speaking of quilietes, where is that Embry fool? I hope something crazy happens when they finally do meet, but not something crazycrazy like an imprint because that would ruin the whole premise of the story.

Anywho, I hope you keep at this and update soonn(:

-kelsey