Just wow!

Morning freshness and mist. Great combination, interesting story, beautiful writing.

Thank you, dear author.

oh! wow, that's so sweet and lovely :)

yet dirty tooo, very nice :)

That was a nice bit of ust and burgeoning love. Nice switcheroo with Bella and Alice. It had a good atmosphere to it, especially the crisp wintery feel to the first half.

Thanks!

This story was just as sweet to read...all these months later. I still love the whole concept of this o/s. The mystery of the girl, and why she's always running away. The entire story is perfection from beginning to end. Love it :)

beautiful! i loved it...good luck in the contest!

I'm so glad I finally got to read this, I enjoyed it! And I'm curious now if you're planning on continuing the story or not. You definitely set it up perfectly if you do decide to continue it, but it stands alone nicely as well.

lol... to think... this time she kept HIM waiting... lovely story...

I really really liked it! D

Aw, I love this!

This was so well done! Beautiful...

Thanks for sharing!

Kathie

:D

I love the twist of it being Alice at the end, as we were assuming Bella was the runner!

Lovely, of course, but then you knew that I thought that. I'm in favor of tree sexing, which you might have noticed in my own writing. Love the strong guy holding up the woman and having a little fun :)

I liked that it wasn't 100% certain that we were talking about Alice til the end and I love the air of mystery about her. Why was she running from him? Why did she finally let him touch her? Why didn't she give him her name and why was she ready for him when she knocked on Mrs. Swan's door? So many questions that one can take and ponder on their own time :) Always fun.

Good luck! :)

Nice twist :)