| Reviews for A Darker Shade of Black |
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  born-this-way chapter 8 . 9/28/2012 Are you doing amother chapter? |
 Wootar16 chapter 8 . 10/5/2011 LOVED IT! PPMS! |
| LadyElena17 chapter 8 . 10/1/2011 lve this story so far! hoping to read more! |
| RPM Shadow chapter 8 . 9/28/2011 WOW! Is that the end? I hope not! Please continue. |
| SkySwimmer19 chapter 8 . 7/15/2011 I'm glad you updated. Even if it was a 'bit' later than i had hoped... I honestly thought you had forgotten about it and that i would be left with cliffhanger forever. Anyway, can't wait for the next update! Hoping it will be soon! ~~CloudGazer15 |
| MelissaBrittany chapter 7 . 6/29/2011 pleeeeeeaaaase uppppppdddddaaaaaattttte! we really want to know what happens :) |
| cap9419 chapter 7 . 3/19/2011 NO! :( Please update this story! I really want to find out what Reid will say when he finds JJ! I loved the star riddle: "Sort out your stars, Hero. Lupus might be the hardest to find." Really clever! |
| roswell98892 chapter 7 . 2/28/2011 Love the story. please update soon! |
| Lover of Reid chapter 7 . 8/11/2010 Both chapters were great. I am so happy that you had updated. I can't wait for you to update again. Keep up the great work. |
| RedHeadBrowning chapter 7 . 8/4/2010 ah why stop there its getting good |
| ladora chapter 7 . 8/3/2010 Ah, I hope JJ's okay! The only thing that bothers me about your story is that it's written in first person, pov (usually Reid & JJ) when I'm so used to reading in 3rd person. It's not bad, it's just very noticeable to me. I also would expect more emotion coming from the characters considering it is first person; I have a very exaggerated personality, but emotions tend to overrule rational thought, so maybe just focus a little on trying to convey exactly what the characters are thinking on an emotional level. I look forward to reading the next chapter! |
| ZJFS chapter 7 . 8/3/2010 Oh JJ...be okay! Eminnis |
| SkySwimmer19 chapter 7 . 8/3/2010 Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ~~CloudGazer15 |
| ladora chapter 6 . 8/3/2010 Interesting, interesting. I'm a little worried for JJ and what's next! Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| ZJFS chapter 6 . 8/2/2010 Oh can't wait! I'll put you on alert...anyway. Good chapter! Keep up the good work! Eminnis |
