amazing story. beautifully done. it had everything a love story could write. enough tragic love that it was on par with Romeo and Juliet. And it had rofl also.

Well I'm happy now that everything is back in order. A chapter ago I was crying and ranting about unfairness but it's alright now. I really loved this fanfiction. Good work

Fuck i don't like this. I've been binge reading this fanfic and everything was going good till now. Why did iruka have to die? And I don't know if the iruka in this chapter is an illusion or not. This shit had me crying after 1 in the morning.

I love happily ever afters..and how everything is revealed. Life is just better, knowing. I was hooked the entire way through; surprising myself as well since I haven’t been a fan of this pairing. Ty for all the hours you put into this fic, your imagination, the excellent writing! I look forward to more of your stories and even this pairing!

It’s not an illusion is it. I love u for turning fates around.

I can’t believe this...I’m sorry I asked for angst, this is too much! Nooooo

So much of crying and tearing up the story took a turn for soppy a few chapters ago, I was hoping it was a phase. Everything is too perfect and everyone is happy all the time now.
Aaand...Babies aren’t born with teeth but fangs already?

Omg he was just looking for Kakashi...awwww

In a way I’m relieved it’s not a secret anymore! Love ur writing!

Omg I pray there’s a happy ending for all of them.*sob*

I’m in love with this fic!

I dunno why but this story is very emotional that I cried in many chapters

DAMN YOU FOR MAKING ME DEAL WITH SO MANY FEELS. I CAN'T EVEN BREATHE. I WISH I COULD CUSS YOU OUT AND HUG YOU AND CRY AT THE SAME TIME

I can't find you or this story on adult-fanfiction dot org. There's not even a Naruto category. That's the only adult fanfiction site I can even find.

First off: thank you. I've just spent the last three days quite happily reading, and snatching up, this story [including the more *ahem* adult chapters on ] after finding it earlier last week. I have truly enjoyed reading and seeing how all the characters have grown and matured over the course of the story and are truly settling in as parents and families...even if I wanted to swat Kakashi, and sometimes Naruto!

There are a few unanswered questions I would like to ask though. What about Naoaki's health? Will he be blind, or at least sun-sensitive? Did the Hatake katana survive the blast (I hope so!)? And if it did, is it back with the rest of the set? Will one or more of the children chose to take up the Hatake name in the future? Will Iruka get any bounty[ies] on Takeshi's head? Will Iruka and Kakashi have any more children after Sonoe & Naoaki? Will someone figure out the difference between Naruto's and Iruka's version of the 'sexy no jutsu' so other same-sex couples can have children as well? And the final question: got any idea when the epilogue is going to be posted?

Thank you for this delightful, and delicious!, story. I think I'll go poke over the rest of your stories and see if there are any more to snitch. Oh, quick sideline. Have you ever thought about cross-posting your work over to Archive Of Our Own? Frankly, they've got better manners and are a hell of a lot more accepting of some types of stories.