| Reviews for Bella And The Mob Boss |
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  Guest chapter 18 . 4/12 KEEP WRITING |
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/29/2019 Hi, I recently found your story & have enjoyed reading it. I hope you can finishi it. Jane |
 Insecure20 chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 When will you CONTINUE? I am DYING here! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/2/2019 isnt this what always happens? the boy chases after a girl...finally, finally the girl gives in then falls in love with the boy... the boy gets scared and pushes her away... the girl then becomes broken hearted... the boy may come back after a time...but the girl hopefully gives him a tough time of it...if she has any self worth... it's a cute story but old as time...right? :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2019 More chapters |
| Lulu chapter 18 . 3/11/2019 OMG LOVED IT! i honestly can't wait for the next one, and see how the story progresses. The only thing i would suggest is to try and make perspectives clearer, such as which point-of-view we're reading from, but it's not a big problem. I seriously love your writing and story! |
| scarlson31 chapter 18 . 2/21/2019 Add me to those begging you to come back...pleeeeeeeease! |
| Cullen14 chapter 18 . 2/3/2019 Are you every going to finish this story |
| Lydia chapter 2 . 1/4/2019 Please if you're still writing try to complete the story. It's very interesting. The chapters are too short. PLEASE!. |
| bobbysgirl1976 chapter 18 . 12/3/2018 PLEASE! PLEASE! COME BACK SOON! |
| lodico chapter 9 . 5/29/2018 sorry, too much gramatical mistakes |
| lodico chapter 9 . 5/29/2018 I can't keep reading the story, too many gramatical mistakes. |
| ellencu chapter 18 . 3/5/2018 What a chapter! Your story is interesting, however it could use a beta. Would love to see you finish it, if you get a chance to. |
| nbrian72 chapter 18 . 3/7/2018 Update? |
| lydia chapter 18 . 11/21/2017 update the story as so on as possible. it's very interesting. I can't wait to see what will happen next. hurry please! |
