OMG'sh I love it... I loved it. you are awesome. I think it would be even better if it was a chara...

you know what I just realized I read this story before and it was one of my favorites before I joined

I thought this was pretty good actually for a first one shot. Keep writing I know my first story wasn't the greatest "My Happy Ending" wasn't too popular but on my third story "Kidnapped My Heart" I started getting 300 reviews! So keep trying and who knows you might be AWESOME (er) LOL :D -hearts-

That was so cute! The POVs were fine. It makes me sad that you don't have any other stories. I loove how the mom made them do everything and nagi's random thoughts. People don't actually think in story form.

AWWWWWW that was like so romantic. I love the ending. You did have some spelling errors but that's ok and no you did switch views to much. This was amazing please keep writing stories.

I thought this was just absolutely adorable!

-squeal-

:3

Awesome!

Love da ending!

So much fluff! XD

Long un-live the mother!

She rules!

WOOT!

Aww, this was cute.

Especially the ending. :D

No, you aren't a disgrace. XD

It was very detailed, and I really liked it!

Write more stuff sometime? :D

That was comlpetely adorable~ I know, this fic was up, like, 2 months ago. But I guess I didn't see it. I found this on your profile and I instantly wanted to read it. ;D Now to answer your questions.

I do not think you switched P.O.V.s too much. It's good to know what's in both of the characters' heads.

I didn't spot any typos on spelling/ grammar. So you did NOT screw up.

It was most deifnitely not a retarded one-shot! And you are NOT a disgrace to Rimahiko fanfiction. I totally know how you feel. I think that most of the time when I post up a fic. -sweatdrops-

Awww. I would've loved to read your other fics. But they're gone now. -sweatdrops- LOL. Anyway, keep writing! You're awesome at it~

Lizzie~Chan ;D

Hahaha~ I loved that 3 You're an epic writer.

And Rima and Nagi's class is creepy. xD They were watching them kiss. xDD I laughed at that.

Keep up the good work 3

this was...AWESOME! HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY THINK OF YOURSELF AS A DISGRACE? im more of a disgrace than u. YOUR TOO AWESOME! I LOVED THIS ONE SHOT! PLZ MAKE MOREE! OR EVEN A STORY?

Hey! Nice one-shot. You did a good with this; I liked it. I think it was a tiny bit rushed-souding, but really nice. Kawaii.

How long have you been writing? You sound just like I did a year ago. I can tell you have the potential for a great writer, and your grammar is great, which delights me. Just remember that practice makes perfect, especially when it comes to writing. It's really true. There's not much else that can help. No matter how many writing classes you ever take, it will never be any good if you don't practice.

I really enjoyed this story, and hope to see more from you. Rimahiko is kawaii! And the ending was also really cute. This was a creative one-shot, not very predictable, like a lot of them out there. Good job!