Home run for sexual tension ;)

Oh My Ian! They really did make out! XD

This is so good, couldn't stop laughing either, really good story, write more please.

fun story. a bit of ooc

Awww... How glad am I that Wanda's 'stuck' with Ian. They're too cute for words.

Very refreshing story. Well written and an awesome idea,loved it!

Wow, this was so sweet... I loved Mel's idea, totally her! ;) I wish it were longer, it was so much fun to read. Thanks! ;) And job well done!

This was really good.

Great!

this was cute! i loved it:)

You could try working on your characterizations more, you know, since the story was told from Wanda's point of view...it just didn't sound like her when you were writing. But, I suppose that's always hard-when the story you're writing for is written in first person...I zoned out while reading Ian...I love Ian, don't...just don't. I'm really sorry, but other than that, really good. Just need to work on getting characterizations right, feel the characters out and know what they would say and what they focus on and all of that. Wanda pays a lot of attention to detail. I like your Melanie though, you got her perfect!

THAT was awesome. Most def. one of most favorite one shots ever! Good job *grins*

OMG! I LOVED IT! IT WAS HELL AWESOME! Three words, I. LOVE. IT. It waas hell awesomee! I loved it! Ian is a dman sexy man! But well... Sasuke is way sexier than Ian! But well, they are my 2 loves3 Well, Sasuke my love love, Ian my loove. You are an awesome author! loved it! FAVES.

Wow I love this!

Sexual tension is the most akward tension out there but when its present its hard to aliviate it and your plan was fun. Spin the bottle is always fun though.

I loved the fact that Ian and Wanda let go and let themselves actually kiss each other after all those innocent kisses on the cheek everynight.

Great one shot.