Reviews for Lily's Plan
Bronze chapter 6 . 6/27
Why didn't they try telling Lily what was going on? She very well might have had a different response. I, unfortunately expected McGonagall to be of little help. She stills sees Fumblemort as infallible so paid no real attention to the warning those four tried to give.
Bronze chapter 3 . 6/27
Ol' Fumblemort has really done it this time! If it's one thing EVERY fanfiction agrees on it's that you DON'T steal from the Goblins in anyway shape or form! But then Ol' Fumblemort thinks he's above all laws. The laws only apply to lessor beings! Hopefully, the. Goblins will show him the error of such thinking.
isabellaevamara chapter 42 . 6/24
Great story so far hope it continues. Shame all the good stories end just when they get really good it seems.
Guest chapter 42 . 6/14
You are a failure at having even a halfway decent story.
Guest chapter 41 . 6/14
Putting things off. Stupid decision. This author is a dumb motherfucker all around.
Guest chapter 39 . 6/14
Unbelievable bullshit. Amelia bones wouldn’t do anything about the blood quill? You’re a fucking idiot!
Guest chapter 35 . 6/14
Wow. More useless shit so you can roughly follow canon. Your characters are stupid wimps who refuse to do anything making them all beyond pathetic just so you can have things continue to float along canon timetable. Moron.
Guest chapter 34 . 6/14
More talk and no action. Your good guys are a bunch of pathetic losers who take no actions. Harry needs new adults around who will actually do something and not just talk everything to death.
Guest chapter 31 . 6/14
And mcgonagal proves yet again to be untrustworthy.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/14
Idiotic children. There is zero excuse for this to happen except like many other retarded authors before you, you had to dumb down your characters to have a plot. This was fucking stupid as hell and I’m off to hopefully find a non retarded author.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/14
Why did nobody rip into the idiot mcgonagal for not doing her fucking job. She should be sacked
HarmonyEveryday chapter 42 . 6/10
Thank you for sharing. I do hope you find the time and inspiration to pick this up again. I will follow and favorite in that hope.
AlexanderPugh chapter 42 . 5/22
This is so amazing, I hate that everyone who writes fanfiction acts like the Marauders found every single secret passageway. Keep writing, I love this!
Guest chapter 19 . 5/12
good thing in my story that fat rat and crouch will meet their end the rat will never escape askban he will go through the vail along with crouch and his bastard son
Guest chapter 42 . 5/12
good thing unlike you who never finish this story and made stupid stories after this mines will be finish good thing my story will end in year 4 and that fat toad and fudge meets their end before year 1
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