Reviews for A Cruel Fate
therevelqueen chapter 11 . 5/16/2014
This needs to be updated.
DemonKittyAngel chapter 11 . 9/7/2013
...you stopped... right before Hiccup and Toothless could see each other again. *deadpan*

WHY!?

Did the chapter just get stuck? Did you get nothing in three years? Where did this go!?
The Cinderninja chapter 11 . 8/9/2013
Asdfghjkl such an amazing story, so, /so/ near to the end, and then... and then... no closure. /No closure/. *wails*

Oh well. I knew it had no ending before I started, so the only one to blame is myself. 'Twas a good story while it lasted. It actually managed to keep me really interested, somehow.

Dash
Ferdoos chapter 11 . 11/6/2012
OMG this is the best story ever pls finish it or I will be forced to hunt you down
Drago829 chapter 11 . 8/16/2012
aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhh! UPDATE...please
Drago829 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
it was decent but realy falling off a clif?
redamiB6147 chapter 11 . 11/21/2011
thank you for having a toothless based story. It made my night. And i especially like the fact that you made him immortal and grieving. please continue
The Silver Night Fury chapter 11 . 7/3/2011
this is amazing! You must continue!
NITRO PSYCHO chapter 11 . 11/10/2010
Wow, this is a really good story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and don't worry about it being here bacause you didn't have anything else to write. Pretty much all my stories were Spur-of-the-Moment ideas when they first came out.
Chocobo Scribe chapter 11 . 8/8/2010
Aw man I hope things work out for Hiccup and Toothless!

I might be using some similar situations ina fanfic i'm sorking on (hiccup dying and all but the actions taking place in the latter half of the 21st century) but instead the heroes go to a paranormal prof. and perform a seance (basically trying to get a ghost's attention) and Hiccup's ghost gets stck in one of them.
The Mad shoe1 chapter 11 . 8/4/2010
I can't wait for the next chapter, this is getting really good.
Psyco Kid chapter 11 . 8/3/2010
Nice, i have liked the idea of Toothless being a god, keep up the good work!
Pink Tubby Custard chapter 11 . 8/2/2010
yay! She wasn't punished badly! :3 Update soon!
MusicPeaceAndCheese chapter 11 . 8/2/2010
WOO HOO! Yes! YES! (gets brought down by the men in white suits) This was awesome! Finally Toothless and Hiccup will be reunited! Yay! Update ASAP!
marmelada chapter 11 . 8/2/2010
I see the way you can make that waiting up to us... Guess what is this...

Well all I can say is: keep it on, because you're doing great work. But please, one 2-month break is enough. I had almost forgotten about this story, I must say, shame on me.
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