Agh! Why am I barely reviewing now!

Anyway, I must say that reading this story was an incredible journey, an angst-ridden journey that I just couldn't get enough of.

Roxas' frustration with Axel was just so tangible, I could feel along with him, and hell, it got me so damn frustrated too! That's an amazing accomplishment- being able to evoke these emotions in your readers. You built up Roxas' anger and confusion and countless many other emotions so perfectly, just the right amount, and so when you posted the final chapter, everything fit together seamlessly and made the ending so believable.

I'm sad to say that this has ended, but really, it was an amazing read.

Thank you! :D

-Tweekerz

SO GOOD. Now it all makes sense! I loved the ending. Yay.

I was at the stratosphere in September...and I'm pretty sure it doesn't close down anymore. XD I saw people jumping off it at three a.m. Vegas doesn't believe in sleep.

i really enjoyed the story! i am a little disappointed with the ending though...kinda left it open. i do hope you'll make a squel like you mentioned! )

This story is really good! its like I'm reading the novel version of the game, but different things happening lol. Axel and Roxas are very in character too. I hope there will be more.

I gotta ask though, will this fic have a sad/tragic ending? I mean will Axel and Roxas stay together? I just want to know cause I don't like sad endings. ):

but anyway amazing job, I love how much it feels like the game. I hope to write something like this one day.

Ohhhh, the angst!

I seriously have to tell you how much I LOVE THIS STORY. Poor Roxas, seems he can't just take a break. I love how you express Roxas emotions and inner turmoil, its like I'm feeling along with him, and it makes me so sad ;; Axel's making me mad too...

Please update faster, I don't mean to be rude, but I just can't wait for the next chapter. That rhymed!

Love your fic!

- Tweekerz

i love your story! this is verry intresting to read because its not like other storys ive read... please update soon

NOOOOOOOOO. So much emotion! Such drama! They should be together! But they cannot. That was awesome. I'm going to read it again. Nice job!

T_T WHY OH WHYYYYYYYYYYY

My heart hurts.. XD

It's okay that the chapter didn't come out as fast as promised, life is unexpected. ;D

I loved it.. but I think you may be purposefully crushing my soul. You write angst and tragedy SO DAMN WELL.

Can't wait for more

awww-no! too sad. *sniffles* poor roxie. axie, stop being a dumbass!

thanks for sharing! *tosses you pocky* keep up the good work.

Oh god.. I feel like crying now.. ;~;

That was extremely well written, and the feeling came across strongly. I feel so heartbroken for poor Roxy.. and sympathetic for Axel. At the last bit, I was like: "NUUUUUUU! TURN ARRRROUND!" XD

I can't wait for the next chapter~! Quick update, ey? I'll hold you to that. ;)

~Wings of Velvet

,n,

PLEASE PUBLISH MORE SOON! This story rules and kicks ass! XD

suggestive themes? that was SO PG of a chapter.

anyway...good filler-ness. kudos for working in the game.

*tosses pocky* keep up the good work!

Love this so far! It's hard to find a good AxelXRoxas fic that isn't AU or just plain out bad. Had to say the little story with Axel's other was pretty interesting and I love how your characters are developing. Please update asap!