Reviews for Sex slave |
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Literate chapter 1 . 4/24/2019 Pretty decent storyline, although the spelling and grammar isn’t very good. Please fix that! |
srp chapter 1 . 7/14/2017 it is a good story and i would like to see more but when you wrote this i would have like to have saw punishment for not listening at first. |
Yumerio patissiere lover chapter 1 . 3/19/2017 make more I am interested |
chatsbugaboo chapter 1 . 3/21/2016 Please make more! I want to read the next chapter |
unknown chapter 1 . 1/30/2016 when will there be a 2nd chapter its really good except for the grammer |
karella chapter 1 . 3/30/2015 i like it iy exciting |
honeysenpai14 chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 so adorable! |
fuckthatbitch chapter 1 . 1/2/2015 I'm glad that she got fucked and in the end she cumed first coz men are better and all sluty bitches should be fucked |
Rose chapter 1 . 11/8/2014 omg.. This needs a sequel! |
WET chapter 1 . 10/14/2014 Now Im wet down below. |
aminelover chapter 1 . 10/2/2014 it as so beautiful i have no words i am speachless |
Nikki chapter 1 . 9/20/2014 I am speechless this is amazing |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2014 This was hot. I will admit you have a lot of grammical mistakes. These can easily be fixed but again this was pretty hot ;). You could easily write more with the other male characters and their appointed couple... |
thenotsogirlygamer chapter 1 . 8/14/2014 That was interesting and . Very very satisfying sadly but I'm a woman and I'm very ups e t about the sex slab thing u should reverse the roles in another story |
Kacie chapter 1 . 8/12/2014 Your really dumb, first shugo chara doesn't have double d's, second she isn't that slutty more innocent, and third of all you need to edit your shit. Give her more class, and pls call me a bitch for telling your 2010 ass how it is. X* |