I LUVED IT!

Predictable you said? Yeah. It might be predictable, but the way you worded it, makes me live at the moment. Ya know? I have this idea of what will happen next but didn't really care. You made me laughed, anxious, angry, horny af you know the deal xD Though I didn't really expected the Sasuke revelation. For one, at first, I thought Fugaku is a good guy at this fic (since Minato is the bad guy. I've been thinking that maybe they've switched roles xD). That Fugaku planned this or helped his youngest son. Then Itachi came. I thought Sasuke will replaced Itachi as the family planned. But somehow, I thought that maybe Itachi is Sasuke? But was quickly brushed of, when Naruto described him. When I read how Fugaku acted, another theory came as a passing thought. That it was Itachi who'll help Sasuke. When Kakashi came, I thought maybe Sasuke didn't even know that he's rich. Something along the lines, because I haven't really focus on my thoughts and theory. I am reading. And continue doing so, unable to stop until I'm finished. With each words, sentences and paragraphs, my theories changed. And was kinda taken by surprise. I didn't expect Sasuke to be genuinely a carpenter, with no knowledge on the business world. He hired Kakashi. And he's doing stuffs, with him working hard in literal labor. It's kinda sweet. Doing that for his country. None would think like this (exceptions are always welcome, of course), he's selfless. But at the same time, confident and can be intimidating. He can act like he's the CEO when he's not. I like the way you portrayed him. Unique. This story is satisfying in a strange way. It had that allure that I can't explain. It's actually one of the best one of a kind fanfiction there. I mostly read on Ao3 and wattpad. But ff net have great fictions on their own. Also, on the time of SasuNaru era. There's lots of it. And many are really noteworthy (screenshot-worthy xD). I'm ok with NaruSasu which is now quite dominant and on par with SasuNaru. But I like both. I mostly go with switching and equality. Because switching on the middle of a steamy sex (especially if there's clones involved hot af), so yeah I prefer this ninja verse on equality tho. Somehow SasuNaru is more hot on Au and stuffs. You know the strange allure. In real life when I see a Naruto, I'll want to dominate that person of course. It can't be helped.

Oh my god! I'm only on the summary and warning and all of the things I (secretly xD) love is there! Dude, I almost didn't read this because the decription is a little bland or cliche but I didn't expect this has so much in it already

THIS. IS. SO. HOT!

I FREAKING LOVE IT!

Age gap, Older Sasuke, Unexpectedly Rich Sasuke, Mutual in Love, the Eloping(?) scene.

THIS IS ALMOST PERFECT!

I don't mean to sound pervert, but I love the Headcanon where Sasuke have a Big Duck. XDDDDD #peace

Luv it!

Nice story, would be nice if you warned or mentioned (AU) somewhere in the description or in a warning. (i clicked on this expecting Narutoverse it's not that your story isn't good, but it's jarring because I expected Narutoverse, and since it is a good story I'd prefer not to get jarred if I fav it XD and come back to read again. XD)

I died at "YOLO"

Beautiful fic, yo.

Wow, I wasn't really expecting much of this story, so I am blown away with how much I like it. I lovelovelove the ending - frog-turned-prince :D

Honestly I didn't know what to think of it at first, but by the end I was in love. Though there are a few errors here and there this story is wonderful. I love the different setting, yet slightly traditional to the originating universe. I enjoyed the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke, though I am displeased with your portrayal of Minato I can set it aside considering the story is good. Thank you for writing and sharing this lovely three part story.

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When you started this story by apologizing for making Minato a bad guy... I was worried. But this turned out so fantastic great! I didn't mind seeing Minato as the bad guy for once - although I prefer him as his sunny self.

And "haha" at Sasuke's fetishes XD

All in all - well done! :D

i like the Cinderella story. its hot and a little guessable. but still good. its a pity that you take a break from writing. i hope you will active soon.

Aw, damn cute that last bit. :3

Yup, I love this! :D

Yes it was predictable, but in a good way. :P

Happy ending! :D

Wow this is the first fic I read where Minato is the bastard not the one who helped :DDD

Narito WILL marry Sasuke! XI

This story is interesting :DDD

*continue reading*