Your agent FBI stupid as fuck

Please finish this its a great story..sad to see in complete...

I hope that one day, you will come back to finish this story! I loved it!

Would loveee to hear more from them!
Thanks!

I'm so happy to have found this gem! I love the plot :)

Nooooo you stopped updating :'(
I wonder how would Bella react... Will she flip out and be mad at him? Or will she be fine with it?
Sighs. Update please?

Honestly, bella is really just sensitive to anything edward does. I mean annoyingly sensitive. Anything he does in this story that hurts her even a little, he's an ass and she can get all pissy about it.

Long list was very short.

i love this story do update soon

Edward: I thought it was bad enough that Edward abuses his power (both, in getting an advantage in what the ladies are thinking, but also getting away with crap at work because he's so valuable).

But, I'm not sure I like this Bella a whole lot either. She admitted liking getting cat-called in an earlier chapter, and now she's mad that she's not getting sexually harassed by her superior anymore?

Are we supposed to find Edward hot and irresistible?

In our ordinary, run-of-the-mill, everyday life, a "human moment" is a moment when a person is both physically AND emotionally present. It's a moment when, for better or worse, we realize that we are not automatons or robots, but human.

In the Twilight books, they use the term "human moment" to characterize something in opposition to the vampires in the story, who don't have to eat, drink, use the bathroom, etc., like humans need to do to survive.

Using the term "human moment" in an AH story always bugs the crap out of me.

So, I'm confused. I assumed that Jake was a jerk (at least in his feelings towards Bella), because he repeatedly refers to her as "his virgin" in his thoughts, like she's just some possession that he wants to claim. Now, it seems like he has real feelings for her? I don't think much of him (or of Edward, still).

LOVED Bella's reactions towards both the guys. Yes!

I also don't understand the airbags. How is Seth's modifications to them make them any safer if Edward cannot move after they're deployed? What if someone were after him, trying to kill him? And he cannot move? Makes zero sense.

I'm guessing Jake's a douche, because who refers to their girlfriend as their "virgin girlfriend"? TWICE!

So far, I'm not finding this Edward attractive...I think he's smarmy. I like the storyline, so hopefully, he redeems himself.

And I'm glad this Bella stands up for herself and isn't some pushover.

Washington Monument is not only made of more than granite, but it is not solid at all. Claiming the monument is "solid granite" would make it 100% granite...no structural reinforcements of any kind, no hollow spaces. Not having been there myself, a little bit of Googling told me there's at least a lobby at the bottom, an elevator, a staircase, and an observation area at the base of the pyramidion. That hardly makes the monument "solid."

If I bought a chocolate Easter bunny that claimed to be solid and wasn't, I'd be sorely disappointed! lol