the story is interesting. i hoped to read more chapter.

This is honestly an amazing fanfic in my opinion. I love your take on the ninja world and it’s occupants. The dynamics and nature of the characters I think are perfect too. Not to mention your story is so well written and your creative. I don’t know if you’ve stopped writing or if you’ve abandoned this fic but I surely hope not and anticipate a future chapter.

Please, could you have spared us from Naruto's crush on Sasuke.

This is a solid story and it's a shame you never continued it. The cruel logic that you employee makes it even better. Well done with this one

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Read it twice now and loved it twice. Sad it hasn’t been updated in so long. But I hope you continue it soon

love the fanfic ion, can't wait for more

My one pet peeve is that better chakra control results in less smoke when using clones and substitution...
People forget to take into consideration that the smoke is there to hide which is the real body and which is the clone-
Another is that the bunshin is useless- kaKashi uses it to great effect in one of the fillers- using a substitution and a clone over the substitution to make it look like he was still there.

This is really good

I hope they can pull this off

well Kakashi and sasuke are scum in this as far as I can tell and I wish Naruto had gotten more pissed about being lied to straight to his face if they don't show they will be disqualified yeah right

The chunin exam isnt in the forest

Sucks

Do. Not. Stop. Writing!

I'm reading this... and I keep on seeing todoroki shouto no matter how hard I try xD