Reviews for Forever
Anna Lane chapter 1 . 5/31/2018
That was a sweet first time.
jabc4 chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
Twas very nice.
Zane S. White chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
Well done for your first fanfic. Derek went a bit out of character, though. By the way fanpire4000 is a awesomesauce name.
KrazyBird13 chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
Great story I love it so much!1
you're a really good writer!
RedReaper180 chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Wow, I stumbled across this while looking for my fav Darkest Powers fanfic but, again, wow! I think this one replaced my fav!
L.O.S chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Clap clap clap clap.
My god, your writing style was exactly what I would expect from Kelly Armstrong, which is quite a feat! That means you made the story perfect! And this is your first fanfic? If so, wow, just wow.
More please! I am looking forward to more of ur writing!
Isabelle chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
Great fic! I just finished the books (again) and wanted to see it go further. You definitely delivered and stayed in character really well! Thanks :)
PiptheSnake chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
You did we'll, don't worry.

Plz dont respond to this; my mum will flip
mellovmusic chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Don't worry, you did a great job with their characters ;p keep writing, ur really good at it. :D
ladyluck25 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Very well written. The fun thing with fanfic is you get to twist them to your own liking, and let's face it. Us adults want a more adult storyline.
jhsdishidjmc chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
You should continue this story! I loved it!
loverboysgirl chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
wow
dadby chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
The beginning was kinda sad, but the ending was awesome! I loved it! Yay, lemons! C/D FOREVER!
Analei chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Heck yeah I liked it!
Reach For Me chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I have to say: I think that I enjoyed the beginning part more than the lemon. The lemon was good as well, don't get me wrong. Great one-shot btw
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